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Tf2sniper326 chapter 6 . 6/8 I would go for a Darcy Lewis pairing. You'd basically have to invent a character for Pietro and I think Carrie and Wanda are a little too similar to have interesting chemistry. Someone like Darcy could prompt Carrie to come out of her shell, and Carrie could teach Darcy that it's necessary to slow down sometimes. You've got a pretty good start here, but later down the line scene recreations with a little bit of Carrie stuff isn't going to be enough. What would make this fic great is if Carrie grew out of her wallflower instincts, went on her own solo adventure, and she a significant effect on the events of the MCU. How do you do that? I have no idea. But you've got talent, I think you can make it work. |
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 7 . 5/31 Thanks for noting us. Don't worry, work at your own pace. Keep the good writing. |
Bad Ass Female Fighter chapter 7 . 5/30 When I saw this notification, I pretty much had a heart attack. Then I got a second one when I saw that it as an Author's Note, I genuinely thought you gave up on this story. But thank goodness you are only doing revisions. Good luck and have fun. |
SubToPewdiepie chapter 4 . 3/16/2019 Which side wi Carrie be on I. civil war? Also I think bicky and carrie will be friends. |
Barreck chapter 1 . 1/18/2019 Kinda lazy of your part to use nearly the same scene and dialogue when she wake up then when Captain america did at the end of his movie, also i don’t know anyone sane who would want to have anything to do with shield when shield let them by abused physically and mentally by her own mother and everyone in her school for two years without doing shit. |
luz nocturna chapter 5 . 12/10/2018 Hola que salga en Iron Man 3 |
luz nocturna chapter 4 . 12/10/2018 Hola cuando la continuas necesito saber más mas más mas más Así que seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla a y ahora que lo pienso Carrie también haría linda pareja con Brus Buenos seguíla Chau |
HarmonyGirl567 chapter 6 . 7/20/2018 Oh I have waited for too long! Please update soon... |
Nighlocktheawesome00 chapter 4 . 5/23/2018 Carrie vs Ebony Maw. That's a fight I'd love to see. |
Nighlocktheawesome00 chapter 3 . 5/23/2018 Loved it. The interaction between Tony and Carrie is hilarious. |
EmoH123 chapter 1 . 3/21/2018 All of the Avengers: I've only known Carrie for a day and half but if something were to happen to her, I'd kicked the ass of everyone in this room. (A Brooklyn Nine-Nine reference by the way) P.S. love the story and hope you update soon! |
Bad Ass Female Fighter chapter 6 . 1/3/2018 This is the best Carrie/Avengers crossover I've read in my life. I love how you incorporated Carrie into the movie. I get the feeling she's gonna play a major role in the fight against Loki. I'm fine with any of the pairings involving Carrie. I think S.H.I.E.L.D is gonna catch wind of Rachel Lang and bring her in before Loki gets her. I love the Bruce flashback, it truly gave me clarity over their past. I especially love the Thor and Carrie moment where he tells her she's worthy. That gave me the older brother and baby sister family feel seeing how Carrie needs that type of guidance to make her feel centered and happy. Since it's a new year, would you be willing to post another chapter and show us the next step in Carrie's fight? |
TrueHorror88 chapter 6 . 11/29/2017 Awesome story m8, hope that you will continue the good work |
dhnysports88 chapter 6 . 11/6/2017 Carrie with Pietro, please continue this story |
matthorserider40 chapter 6 . 10/26/2017 OOh boy I can't wait to see what happens next in chapter 7 please update soon I would also like to see what the suit looks like for carrie |