Terrific story! Enjoyed very much!

You write so beautifully! I have been hooked on to every piece I'd read from which you have posted. This chapter had a most enjoyable banter between Sharon and Provenza, something I'd began to miss, which was more evident in Season1-2. :(

Oh please, please can we see Sharon with a hickey on Major Crimes? That would be so priceless. Great job putting together this case. I could never incorporate a procedural into one of my fics and make it believable. Kudos.

I started reading this probably at least a week ago but then got so busy I couldn't finish it until just now. It was driving me a little bit crazy to have to wait until I could scrounge together the time to be perfectly honest.

I can't say enough how much I loved this story. Even with the first chapter being the car crash, I actually forgot about it while I was reading and got lulled into the investigation so much that the accident was almost jarring to me - but totally in a good way! It was like life - surprising, unexpected, out of nowhere.

Also I love how realistically you dealt with their injuries, including the proper field treatment if a person is impaled by a foreign object. I think a lot of writers might have had them remove the metal from Sharon's leg even though, as you said, she could have bled out and died that way. Plus, the fact that although Andy was conscious pretty much the whole time he actually had worse injuries was a nice and kind of realistic touch.

I've really fallen in love with your stories and your writing style. You write the Major Crimes characters - especially Sharon and Andy - so well.

Another fabulous story dear! I loved every minute of it! You manage to capture each character so well, not that I'm surprised mind :D I'll be reccing this fix in the FB Shandy grp :D

I love it sooooo much. Please update

Fabulous, thanks.

I am always amazed by your stories because you just nail everything. Your writing style is both fluent and engaging and your characterisations are completely spot-on. I love how you are able to find a perfect balance between drama and humor. I love how you write Provenza and how you involve all the other characters, too. Your original characters are also so balanced. I caught myself thinking that I would really love to hang out with Isabelle. All in all, I have to say that your fics are among or perhaps the best I have ever read for MC. Please write many many more. :-) Flynn and Sharon were just so cute in this one without ever becoming too sweet. Sigh. The way they were in the hospital bed together...

You also bring out Sharon's maternal side so well which brings me to an idea I've had while reading this. If one stays true to the actual specifics of the show, of course, it is completely insane, but I was really wondering how you would write an unexpected pregnancy kind of thing for these two. I like fics with that kind of story, but people tend to be a little out-of-character in them. I would just love to read one with Sharon and Andy being their usual selves as I trust you to be able to write them that way. As for their ages, well, that might be AU-ish in terms of just making them both younger. :-D Anyway, I would find it very interesting to read such a story from you as well as anything else you might come up with!

Creo que realidad le gusta is wrong, le gusta what? el qué le gusta? Sánchez? Then Creo que en realidad le gustas-buzz or creo que en realidad le gusto-Sánchez.
and lo contrario del amor no es el odio, es la indiferencia is correct

Awesome! Loved every bit!

Not finished yet, but had to stop and leave a review about how much I'm enjoying this! I wish the episodes were able to be this fleshed out. I love the mystery/crime you have going, as well as the delightful banter and spot-on characterization. Fabulous! I'm relieved it's complete, and that I have so much left to enjoy. Thank you!

OMG! Nooo! I love Julio...those are his people in there!

Amazing story, thank you. How you write the team together is spot on. And of course I love Sharon and Andy. X

Oh sooo good! I will definitely be coming back to re-read this over and over, like most of your work. Thanks so much for a great read, I loved every minute of it! (also very sneaky starting out with that first chapter so then every time anyone's in a car you're wondering - is this it? lol!)

Really enjoyed this story. There so could be a sequel.