I enjoyed this!

Was this a one shot?

Have you considered expanding this one shot into a larger chaptered story?

Smoking hot one-shot! I wish there were more parts!

My heart's racing, I'd love to see romance blossom here. She teaches him its wonderful to cut loose, and he shows her it's more than acceptable to let somebody in ;3
Lovely all the same

wow! very good work!

HawkAngel

Wow. I loved all of this.
Not sure if you take prompts - but I would die if you wrote a Batman/Batgirl story.

So damn hot and Romanogers! And Natasha in some deep denial with Steve ball's deep in her lol. Lovely!

Oh, Natasha. There's only so many times you can look into those eyes and copulate his brains out before you admit to yourself and to him your heart is melting too.

Which is how HE prefers it, might I add. Old fashioned, ya know.

OMG! Why does this have to be a one shot?! D: I'm such a Natasha/Steve shipper!

btw I have an Avengers RP forum if anyone is interested! Just PM me (:

Wow! Very great descriptions interesting fashion on how you used them but I can't deny the stunning use of words. The way they enraptures you attention and perfectly paint out the situation. You're a talented descriptive writer

Hot and sexy without being raunchy and unbelievable. Loved it! Great job!

Probably one of the hottest one shots I've ever read. I've always shipped Steve and Natasha, but even more so after watching The Winter Soldier. The language in it was raw and profound. The imagery was truthful and the little thoughts in between were great. Natasha is Steve's window into a new world and perhaps he can be her salvation, if she lets him

Please make this into a story, it's so well written

Luv it..please continue..with falcon