Reviews for Till the End of the Line
reviewer chapter 11 . 11/1/2018
That was really enjoyable. I hope there is more to this, because it feels like it's just beginning. Thank you for writing this!
reviewer chapter 10 . 11/1/2018
I liked the escape sequence a lot! I enjoyed Natasha and Clint's interactions the most perhaps. Glad the operation went well overall.
reviewer chapter 8 . 11/1/2018
I really like the character interactions, especially Steve's fight with Natasha. I also love Nick's "I'm going to pretend you said yes" LOL. Clint helping Bucky is also great.
RedWingSolder64 chapter 8 . 11/21/2016
I really like that you don't make Bucky like fall apart and seem like a mess. Thanks
Guest chapter 8 . 9/29/2015
Of sh!t yeah!
Guest chapter 5 . 9/29/2015
Tony as a distracted genius, I'm surprised you didn't make him ask where his glasses were before he remembered he didn't wear any. I. Love. It! XD
AngelfromBeyondBelow chapter 11 . 9/16/2015
Awesome story, I hope that you write some more, about Bucky adapting to SHIELD life.
scullysthumbtacks chapter 11 . 9/13/2015
This was fantastic! I really enjoyed this fic. Thanks for adding an epilogue, it really tied everything up neatly - but still left some things to the imagination.
I'm glad you didn't entirely fix Bucky at the end- I don't think he'd recover quite as quickly from being the Winter Soldier as some fic authors have him do. This fic was so engaging, realistic and and beautifully written. Thank you so much :)
Mirlana chapter 11 . 9/13/2015
Thank you for all ! I enjoy your story until the end it was just really interesing and amazing :)

See you again maybe !
0279 chapter 11 . 9/12/2015
You're alive!
Personally, I loved this story. It's a shame it's over. The epilogue feels kind of rushed. I would expect more of a response from Stark than just a Star Wars reference (though I could see him doing that). I mean, sure he was brainwashed, but it was his father.
I was also expecting more of a story from this, more than just the one mission as a good guy and that was it. But you know what, I liked it! It was pretty deep, you captured the characters perfectly, it had action. Though Civil War is still eight months away, I do see Bucky's recovery similar to how you presented it here.
It had minor grammatical errors here and there, but overall it was very well done. Very well done for a first story. Considering how writers usually improve after learning from their first story, I imagine you to be an professional writer in the future.
Thank you for this wildly entertaining story.
-Batman
DXRULES103 chapter 10 . 9/2/2015
Ugh this is such a good story. I can't wait to read more!
MissAnimeMiss chapter 10 . 9/24/2014
wow read the whole story in one night! can't wait for another update hope its soon!
Calenture chapter 10 . 8/29/2014
Just found this story :00000 I love it so much! You are such a great writer... I can't believe I haven't reviewed yet :/ my apologies!
In this last scene I just was imagining Tony's face... Anyway thanks for a great read! I can't wait to read more!
Calen
rain chapter 10 . 8/26/2014
wow
Self-Inflicted Insanity chapter 10 . 8/15/2014
OH! First of all: I CANNOT EVEN TELL YOU HOW INCREDIBLY HAPPY I AM THAT YOU'RE BRINGING WANDA AND PIETRO MAXIMOFF INTO THIS! *GRINNING* *really hoping that they'll actually be included in the story and not just mentioned and alluded to* Seriously, like when those two cells and the wooden blocks were mentioned, I swear my heart like jumped with excitement and I totally grinned, and then when Pietro and Wanda were mentioned, I was mentally like, "YES!"
Ahem. Nextly (that's probably not even a word), I think that this chapter contained a good amount of angst ;3 Not lacking and not cloying. Loved seeing Bucky cracking just the slightest bit there at the end. And the interactions between Clint and Natasha here are just /wonderful/ and I adore them.
I also loved Bucky being completely uninjured after falling three stories, and seeming completely unperturbed by almost getting blown up. The total Winter-Soldier-ness of him throughout most of the chapter made the cracking at the end even more... like, significant, y'know?
And yeah, action can be difficult to write :/ I think you did quite well though - I could totally feel the panic while they were crawling through the air ducts. (Oh, and I also loved how when they realized they were trapped and there was no other exit, Clint was immediately like 'air ducts!' as if it was the most obvious thing in the world XD)
Thanks for the update!
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