i still think Edward should have been given the Darwin award and then killed.

am i imagining it or is Esme still alive? i thought she was killed in Volterra but you've mentioned her twice now as being alive. thank god Sue died. Emmett would have felt so bad if he had had to kill her. i hope Lily Rose has learned her lesson about being a brat!

how can Sue profess to love Charlie and be such a conniving bitch to the only family he has?

L O L !

i wouldn't trust Carlisle, he is always going to put Edward first. after all, he is all that is left of the Cullen "family".

just wanted to point out a flaw in this chapter. you have esme checking on bella while she's changing but esme is dead! esme betrayed jasper and bella in the first story!

Wonderful story! Thank you for sharing.

Esme and Carmen came out. ...Isn't Esme supposed to be dead?

Exciting, fun, and imaginative. You understand that it isn't necessary to draw out problems. You don't waste time, you come up with quick, practical solutions. You have a good tactical mind which is one of the things I like best about your stories. It was pretty awesome that Leah imprinted on Caden. She does deserve happiness. Thanks again for a good read.

Edward is going to die for this.

Charlie might just make the best vampire grandfather ever.

Fate is being kind to the Whitlock's and Cullen's. Emmett hasn't ever been in a real war or situation that calls for the real hard truths in life and would have felt a measure of guilt for the rest of his existence.

What is Lily Rose going to say when she hears about Sue's accident? She'll know she caused it. Will she admit that to Caden and her parents? Will Caden know what she did? Will Jasper feel her guilt?

Only Peter.

Sad for Charlie, but Sue and the Pack are to blame for the rift between him and Bella. Will the Pack try and do something about Bella being a vampire? Let them try. It will be the end of the Pack.