Reviews for The Beautiful Ones
Swurve chapter 13 . 7/14/2014
Great great updates
Natalie92 chapter 13 . 7/14/2014
Thanks for the three wonderful chapters! I think it will be great for Danny and Karen to spend time with their family in Arizona. Grandma Ava is such a lovely woman. I can see her and Danny becoming close. Looking forward to reading more. :)
Tammy chapter 13 . 7/8/2014
The update was a very well written and sweet. I like the growing bond between Danny and his Grandma Ava.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/7/2014
thanks for the updates. nice to see a story from this perspective.
Kla1987 chapter 8 . 7/7/2014
The weird thing about this fic is that, at this point, I am not the least bit interested in seeing Danny and Lacey get back together. He so does not deserve her!

I am slightly interested in seeing something develop with Rico - even if it's just a strong friendship. They're good for each other.

On to the next chapter!
Guest chapter 10 . 5/29/2014
Wow very powerfully lover to each oher no matter how their. Mad at eaxh otherc. Love is love. As a simple strong and beautiful
ShaSha3 chapter 9 . 5/28/2014
Ok so obviously that review was submitted way before I meant it to lol...ok as I was saying...I feel like if twisted were to get renewed they would have to go back and tie up loose ends as you have done here for it to even work. The writers did so much damage but what you've done here by redeeming Laceys character and putting responsibility of actions of others on blast is brilliant. You are dissecting if you will each character with the intentions on rebuilding these friendships and love interests! As it is stated Dacey will always be end game! I love how detailed and meticulous you are when going deep into these characters, deeper than what was shown in the actual tv show. I really respect what you have done so far with the entire plot! The only way Dacey will ever work is if you start rebuilding the foundation. This fic is deep and I love how your able to portray all the emotions and feelings the characters especially lacey were robbed from the tv show. When you sit and think about 1B it is really sad and upsetting to think of how they completely destroyed something so beautiful which was Dacey. As well as Lacey and Danny's individual character development. Overall Bravo! Looking forward to the next chapter! I know this had to be time and emotionally exhausting but you rocked it! :) keep it up!
ShaSha3 chapter 10 . 5/28/2014
Wow! This was so intense! The things Lacey said to Danny about how Jo was put first above all else really put things into perspective! I feel like if twisted did get
SleepingAngel22 chapter 10 . 5/28/2014
HE expressed " the three little words" that he never evoked on the show. And she texted back "I know". That's all I am saying.
SleepingAngel22 chapter 9 . 5/28/2014
The conversation between my babies was honest and I LOVED it. I love how she was able to give her pov on the hurt and pain Danny desai caused her. Danny himself was hurt and could only show his true emotions by kissing her. Too bad it was short lived lol. I was looking for Danny to put it down on Lacey ( just kidding). Those songs r fitting for everything each character is going through. :)
SleepingAngel22 chapter 8 . 5/28/2014
Girl when Lacey names out the things he did not show compassion for, it literally stung me. Honestly, he only cared for Jo's feelings. There was no reason for Jo 2 be affected by the sex tape. It seemed like it bothered her more than them. I admire Lacey's strength but saying those words at the end ( even though I know she does not mean it) it kinda hurt me cause I was reflecting on ep. 11 in the diner. Grt chapter update and thank you for 3 updates one time.
SleepingAngel22 chapter 7 . 5/28/2014
Girl so many emotions course through me when I reading this chapter. I wanna dislike Danny but I cant bc I see the love he has for lacey is indeed genuine. Thank you so much for exploring this bc we will never know the reason from the show why Danny chose blondie over Lacey so...
Guest chapter 10 . 5/26/2014
Great depiction of the conversation. She has not totally given in but she still gave him some hope.
Natalie92 chapter 10 . 5/26/2014
Thank you so much for the three chapters! I truly appreciate it. It was deep and emotional. I could feel Lacey and Danny's pain. I was getting teary-eyed. You did an amazing job! Danny and Lacey are going through a lot right now, but will find their way back to each other again. They need to grow and get to know themselves. I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for sharing these awesome fics with us. :)
Swurve chapter 10 . 5/26/2014
I was jus too excited to see 3 updates :D you made my day,great great chapters!
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