Sooooo cute

Mini Jellal... must... resist...

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I CAN'T

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I like how you named their daughter! It sounds cool for me. I like too how you put Verrano's character. It doesnt like adult. A bit like teen, maybe, but still sounds like children. Nice!

I love how you make the children of your stories, sounds like... children. When i read stories like these, the kids sound like adults, there is no difference, but here, the talking pattern is of a child and I really admire that.

My only complain as a spanish speaker (I am from Mexico, so... Hello!/¡Hola!) is the fact that I am confused about why you misspelled the name of Erza and Jellal's kid in the story but then write it correctly in the author notes.

Cause "Verano" Fernandez and "Vera" sounds nice. Verrano is quite a big difference in the sound and almost changes the nice meaning of the name and makes me thing of Verraco (which is the way you referrer to a male pig destined as a stud)... i cringed a bit xDDDD but that's me.

So I want to know if you added the second "r" on purpose to give him another sound or what, cause the problem is that for me it ruins a bit the true meaning of the name since it changes it completely.

For the rest, I love Vera's way of thinking and his child voice in my head, is a cute voice, worthy of mini Jellal 3

This is sosososo perfect.

this is just too cute! i love verra's character so much :3

Aw! That was really cute, I imagine Jellal to be this calm and gentle dad haha! I hope you write more Jerza fics :D

That's too funny! Hahahaha This is exactly the kind of Fernandes household I had in mind hahaha

That was cute. I had a fun time reading it. Keep up the good work! :)

So sweet how Jellal explain to his son bout his love towards Erza

I love Jellal he is so gentle and sweet. He and Erza are my favorite coule and they complement each other. I love this oneshot. Please make more about them and their son or daughter.

Nicely done. I really like the character development. Here's hoping for more!