i enjoyed reading it. you are really a good writer. very good. some mistakes like flied, i just noticed. i havent heard that flied is even a word. it should be flew. or the other one like did he carried him? it should be did he carry? all in all it was really good. good job!

wow

its getting better

coming together in form of their daughter

oh no shes gonna be traumatised as well as bette is

and now helenas done both lol

tina hoping the floor will open up and swallow her

awwwwwww

You could have make into more chapters...it was a good story

Alright give me some tibette happiness

Seriously. Im glad the store si complete so i dont have to wait for the next chapters. But the characters are true to themselves i love it

At least Bette and Helena are not dating lol. But they need to talk it out. Still impressed by your writing skills

Omg ! Bette is bitter and its legit. I just hope they will make it up in the end. Wondering if Bette and Tina are dating tho

I am new to TLW fandom and I just finished the whole show. Thanks to Netflix ! And now im obsessed with Tibette. Ill let a review on each chapter ! I love thats a Tina POV . And your writing is amazing, full of description !Im looking forward the next chapter and see Bettes reaction

Thanks alot for updating, this story is really amazing. unfortunatly, i cant read it. dont know why? the text are mixed with the détails, will try on a phone maybe it will work.