Reviews for Song of PTRN
Warmach1ne32 chapter 11 . 1/12/2015
"It would seem that it was an understatement when Caroline said her uncle had an interest in being a superhero" Trudy said. That doesn't sound like Trudy and more like Rona or Weiss said it and Trudy did enter the sidepole.
Warmach1ne32 chapter 9 . 1/11/2015
Thanks for the chapter and and accepting my song selection.
trninjakiller chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
WHY ARE THERE SO MANY STUPID OC TEAM STORIES!
Villain84 chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
You seem to have been getting a lot of praise for this story. I'll add this to my read later list.
ellimae chen chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
I lovoe your writing style...especially the sexual enuendos you drop in so skillfully...lol finally some hot story ideas...cant wait for the next chapter!

ellie
Warmach1ne32 chapter 6 . 7/22/2014
Could you include "Little Wonders" by Rob Thomas, the on used in meet the robinsons? I would really appreciate it if you do. And maybe "Can't Hold Us" by Macklemore and Ryan Lewis too because PTRN have the instruments to play those.. I think and those are great songs.
Warmach1ne32 chapter 5 . 7/7/2014
Firstly, you can't pull a grenade pin with your teeth it is not possibly because the pin is a tight fit to the hole and has been proven impossible by the Mythbusters on TV with scientific evidence to support, unless he have a strength semblance or something. Secondly, the Giant scorpion is named Death Stalker, the name was shown in prof. Port's diagram. Lastly, this is a decent story :) pretty much above average nothing too special but it have it's charms keep doing what your doing.
Brosky the Bear Hunter chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
I have to admit this is one of the better OC stories that I've read
ellie mae chen chapter 2 . 4/12/2014
i thoguth was very wsell written and at time pretty funny..at times pretty hot! lol bu8t I enjoyed it imensely..mispelled a couple words...but then don't we all...please alert me when an update is available.
I love poor Nigel lol...he has his hands full with thoe three!...ery interested to ee how the reolationships between the 4 of them works out.
Good job...keep writing it's very good!

ellie