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   Secret-writer91 chapter 11 . 7/30 Loved this story. |
| Secret-writer91 chapter 10 . 7/30 So happy for them |
| Secret-writer91 chapter 9 . 7/30 Love that slowly things are getting back to normal |
| Secret-writer91 chapter 8 . 7/30 Glad that Charlie knows |
| Secret-writer91 chapter 7 . 7/30 Glad that was over quickly. Poor Bella, now she has to live on with this. Shows how much faith in Alice's visions when they're subject to the choices that people make |
| Secret-writer91 chapter 6 . 7/30 OMG. First Lauren, now Jessica? Does he really think that killing them was going to impress Bella? He's insane and why haven't his family stopped him |
| Secret-writer91 chapter 5 . 7/30 Glad that he told her the truth. |
| Secret-writer91 chapter 4 . 7/30 Oh my God! Glad Jake's being partially truthful with her, though Edward seems to be trying to brain wash her into become the love of his life. I love this twist on Edward's creepy behaviour |
| Secret-writer91 chapter 3 . 7/30 My jaw dropped at the fact that Lauren was murdered. A death like that will rock the whole town and the fact she was dumped on the Chief of Police's lawn like that will only cause gossip. I agree with the assessment that Edward was the one to do it |
| Secret-writer91 chapter 2 . 7/30 Love the changes in how the characters treat Bella, they're friendly not obsessed with her or pushing to be more than friends. Poor Bella being sick in school, something about this Edward is so unnerving and I love how you write it |
| Secret-writer91 chapter 1 . 7/30 Love the idea behind this, instead of drawing her close his scent makes her ill and she's scared of him. Curious to how old Jake is here? He'd have be older right to be in the police force already |
| Kemq chapter 11 . 3/5 Great story. |
| Kmpcarter chapter 11 . 7/17/2019 I really enjoyed reading this. |
| rachel625 chapter 11 . 1/20/2019 Loved it! |
| Lalaith Yamainu chapter 12 . 12/12/2018 Excellent story! |
