Hope that you keep some stuff in the rewritten chapters.

BGM:
start:Harvest December- Bokutachi no Iru Basho
when it's morning again:Ace Attorney - Investigation ~ Opening 2001 (Orchestration)
when the fire master arrives:Suspense - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Music Extended
for the battle:Battle! Gym Leader (Johto Version) - Pokémon Heart Gold & Soul Silver Music Extended
during the Training:Rebuttal Showdown - Extended - Danganronpa V3: Killing Harmony Musik
during the rematch:Discussion -HOPE VS DESPAIR- V3 - Extended - Danganronpa V3: Killing Harmony Musik
after it:Investigation ~ Opening 2001 - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Music Extended

music list:
start:Rain Sounds 10 Hours:The Sound of Rain Meditation,Autogenc Training, Deep Sleep,Relaxing Sounds
In the house:World of Nothing - Super Paper Mario Music Extended
for vivillon and chimchar on their own:The Underwhere - Super Paper Mario Music Extended
When we switch back to the trainers:Castle Bleck - Super Paper Mario Music Extended
for the creepy portrait:Digital Root - 9 Hours, 9 Persons, 9 Doors Music Extended
For Elliots song: Harvest December- Hutatabi no natsu
for Honedge's story:Septenary Game - 9 Hours, 9 Persons, 9 Doors Music Extended
for the battle against team rocket:Harvest December - Himegeki
when Honedge releases Elliot:Senary Game - 9 Hours, 9 Persons, 9 Doors Music Extended
shortly after:
Suspense - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Music Extended
when our heroes defeat team rocket:Phoenix Wright ~ Objection! 2001 - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Music Extended
for the last part:
Ryūtarō Naruhodō ~ Objection! 2017 - The Great Ace Attorney 2 Music Extended

Would have been even funnier if the vivillon had the pokeball pattern.
Music list: (all from Harvest december)
start: Tanoshiku Sawagasshii Jikan
for Team Rockets scene: Slapstick
after it: Bokutachi no Iru Basho
for the pokemon presenting their costumes: Ring
for Spewpa evolving: Kinshi
for the battle: Hito no Isakai
At the sunset: Ao no Sakura
for Clemont trying out his Gadgets: Kemono no Rekishi

Music list:
start:1 Hour of Forest Music 1st track
When Elliot realizes that Manon is a Girl: Harvest December- Slapstick
When Elliot and Co. follow the river: Harvest December: Tanoshiine
When the battle Begins:Battle! Gym Leader (Kanto Version) - Pokémon Heart Gold & Soul Silver Music Extended
After the battle:Maya Fey ~ Turnabout Sisters' Theme 2001 - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Music Extended

music list:
start:Investigation ~ Opening 2001 - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Music Extended
for the discussion who stole the macaron:Investigation ~ Middle 2002 - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney: Justice for All Music Extended
when the battle Begins:Battle! Trainer - Pokémon X & Y Music Extended
After Chimchars fight:Pokémon Center [Remix]
when team rocket arrives:Suspense - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Music Extended
when the battle resumes:Vs. Trainer - Pokémon Red & Blue/Green Music Extended

I did Read chapter 20s note, but I will keep on Reading regardless.
for this chapters music list, I choose 1 piece for reach scene, which means I wont describe the switching points, but heres the list:
Harvest December- Bokutachi no Iru Basho
Investigation ~ Opening 2001 - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Music Extended
Harvest December Sentou Sono Ni
Professor Layton's Theme (PL vs. PW: AA Version No.1) - Professor Layton vs. Phoenix Wright: Ace Att
Santalune Forest - Pokémon X & Y Music Extended
RPG Playlist - Tavern/Inn Music (1st one)
Suspense - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Music Extended
Pursuit ~ The Great Turnabout - Dai Gyakuten Saiban Music Extended
Professor Layton vs. Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney - Courtroom Jester (Cheers!) - Music
Investigation ~ Opening 2002 - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney: Justice for All Music Extended

Music list:
start:Santalune City - Pokémon X & Y Music Extended
When Elliot meets Ash: Harvest December- Tanoshiine
When Bonnie suggests that Viola should marry Ash: Harvest December- Slapstick
When Ashs battle starts:Battle! Gym Leader (Johto Version) - Pokémon Heart Gold & Soul Silver Music Extended
Shortly before the battle finishes:Pursuit ~ Casting Magic - Professor Layton vs. Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Music Extended
When Elliot starts being afraid of Viola: Suspense - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Music Extended
During Elliots desparate training:Dangan Ronpa OST - Discussion -HEAT UP-
For the flashback: Harvest December- Yoru no Shiro
After the flashback: Harvest December- Ao No Sakura
In the Pokemon Center:Pokémon Center - Pokémon X & Y Music Extended
When Elliot vs Viola starts:Pursuit ~ Cornered - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Music Extended
When Elliot gets serious:Phoenix Wright ~ Objection! 2001 - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Music Extended
after the battle:Pokémon Center Theme Orchestrated

Remember my BGM-thing that Ive started in the last 2 Chapter of Arc-VOC and ive continued into Cross-VRAINS? Im doing that for other fanfics now!
Heres the list for this chapter:
start:DANGANRONPA OST: -1-04- Beautiful Days
for the 2nd scene: Pokemon Center XY Music Extended
for Sycamore:Investigation ~ Opening 2001 - Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Music Extended
for Santalune forest:Santalune Forest - Pokémon X & Y Music Extended
for the Scatterbug capture:Vs. Wild Pokémon - Pokémon Red & Blue/Green Music Extended
for the campfire: Virtual Campfire with Crackling Fire Sounds (HD)
Ill go for more detailed reviews once Ive reached chapter 20

Hey there, hope you'll read this and respond! I would've PMed this, but I have confirmed my account yet. In case my names shows up as Guest, my fanfic name is Mara the Wolf. I read the first chapter of Pokemon OC XY Adventures, and I love it. I know you finished this fic, but if make another XY fanfic, maybe you could use my OCs? Up to you, but I'll give you description of them just in case. But first, I'm planning on writing an XY fanfic, would you be willing to collaborate with me? And could I use Elliot, Thomas, and Lizzie in mine? Ok, now for my OCs. They're names are Max and Mira, they're twins and they're both 15. They both have black hair and gray eyes, Max has chin-length hair, Mira's goes past her shoulders. Max dresses in mostly black, chinos, short boots, sunglasses that he never wears, they rest on the brim of his gray fedora, and a satchel bag and red plaid jacket over a white shirt. Mira dresses in plenty of different outfits, but her usual is a brown ribbon smock top, purple satin tiered skirt, grey riding boots, white strappy purse, beige cycling cap with aqua artificial flower pin. Max is kinda aloof, a bit of a tsundere, claims to not like Pokemon, but actually just doesn't like to show his soft side. Mira's personality is... well... quirky. To sum her up breifly, loves steel, poison, and fossil pokemon, hates most fairy and bug types. Wants to collect all the Vivillion patterns. She carries an Eevee doll around all the time (it was a gift from Max). Max's partners are Zira the Litleo/ Pyroar, Valentina the Zigzagoon/Linoone, Cookie the Meowth/Persian, Skittles the Delcatty, and Ali () the Furfrou. Mira's partners are Nidoqueen, Stevie () the Vaporeon, Fiona the Talonflame, and Joy the Lapras. Battle style: Max is a brute forcer with Zira, Speedster with Valentina, and uses style and tatics with Cookie and Skittles, respectively. Mira uses whatever moves she thinks are cute and effective. Max's tatics with Skittles are use attract, then 3 or 4 double teams, then use play rough or ice beam, while holding leftovers. Friends and Rivals: Max: (Fr) Mira, Korrina, Shauna, Serena; (Ri) Ash, his cousin Ren (a lazy, multiple-time Champion) Mira: (Fr) Max, her cousin Ren, Ash, Serena, Shauna. Max has a crush on Serena. Max likes to watch Pokemon performaces, especially Serena's, Mira thinks they're dumb but is willing to Serena and Shuana pointers and constructive criticism. Their catchprases: Max: Let's start things off right! Mira: Let's get this party started!
Thanks!

Update please?

Update please!

When are you going to update?

Please keep the story the way it is. Can you please update?

You mind fixing up on the grammar errors please? I saw some