pls continue the story

PLEASE UPDATE!

Just have them suck of somethin

While I would like to say that this is a great story it isn't it's good not great. I don't like the idea of you blinding percy it almost makes it seem like you're punishing him for something ares started that said I think at some point you should punish ares by demoting him to minor god and promote percy and Annabeth to major gods with new titles in addition to the ones they already have. More updates please!

I liked it very much but please make more. I want to see what happens next!

Update ! NOW ,,,, my life depends on this pls pls pls!,,, keep it at a fast rate

Son of Athena

WOWWWW! Talk about the "unexpected"! Luke's mama at HOGWARTS no less, and she's angry, looking for her son and mad as a hatter at Hermes?! Now this has reeeeeeeeeal promise!

Is Mrs. Castellen even sane?

Good, REALLY Good! The story line is great, although the grammar and syntax (the way in which you USE grammar) can be improved a little bit. Mostly all minor, nothing really major. Some small spelling errors, mostly homonyms (words that sound alike but that have different meanings each from the other). The only thing that I want to suggest is to make the chapters longer; take some time and review what you're saying and see if you can take a little more time to develop the thought. I'm really enjoying this Who'd ever think that so much trouble could come of becoming deities?

Love this!

Aww Nico's was so sad... alksdjfklsajdfkl

By the way I just read your story and you're a really talented writer! You're just what I've been looking for. Have you ever tried RPing? You should take the time to check out this site. It's really fun once you get the hang of it and a good chance to work on your writing skills and character development!

P. S. Most people RP outside the cabins. (Then scroll down to Mess Hall, that's the most popular)

WOW!. This story has some serious twists to it! In fact, it's truly worthy of Rick Riordan!

update

This is a story that needs a bit more development. We need the backstory to the reasons as to why Ares would try such a stupid thing right in the middle of downtown Olympus. And what's more, will this prompt Lord Poseidon to grant more and ever greater blessings upon the person of his newest lieutenant, his favorite son, the already-most powerful demigod of all time? I'd think that there'd be a good chance of precisely this happening, setting up Perseus to overthrow Ares! Can you imagine that? And as for Annabeth, she needs a healing after a long and scary recuperation. RIGHT?

okayokayokayokay it'll alllllll be okay... won't it?