Great tone, and lots of fun. As a girl in her fourth 29 th year myself, I appreciate her reluctance to come clean!

Nice story.

This story was really sweet. Very good. I love Black Canary; Cudos.

That was the best! You should make more!

This was really good. Your Babs and Dinah voices are really good and I laughed out loud more than once. (Not such a good thing since everyone else is in bed, lol.) Keep up the good work, it's great to see someone writing comic-verse fic.

No fair giving her Alfred's cookies and then taking credit. Stupid playboy.
Lian! Perhaps my most favoritest character EVER! (I even use her bad grammer, lol)

What a nice short story! Very well-written. You have just the best mix of action and the great sensitive and humours lines which they both (Babs & Dinah) have when they working together. Good work!

Its perfect that Dinah is celebrating her 29th birthday the... whatsoever-times! *grins*

Women in this business are still the same as other "normal" ones... splendid!

Sorry that Babs couldn't attend at the party but I'd haven't had it otherwise. Its the way it is! Nice thought of Babs that she'd maybe there next year as a neighbour... tricky little bird! ;-)

Sweet that she arranged this whole party at all. She's so caring about the ones she likes and loves in her own special way.

Nice to see Roy and Lian there... though I guess the story was written to a time when Ollie was still dead I guess.

Funny Bat-comments though. I don't know when this story actually happens (comic continuity) I'm not up-to-date if Batman would be so nice(lovingly?) to her... don't know from the books I read that Dinah has some interest in Batman (and likewise Batman for Dinah).

But just a kiss on the cheek between two good colleagues (both from Gotham) are just perfect and really sweet! Though great story!

(and btw... NICE line about Nightwing's butt.. ... just perfect!) ;-)

Write more, you're writing style is excellent

(knowing the good misture of actions, humour, romance, fun and silent scenes!)!

Greetings from Germany!

Dinah's a pretty cool character, although I don't know that much about her, and I'd like to see more of her in your stories :) Hehe, talk about Nightfall's butt...cute.

Hugs, kisses and sweet *day*dreams ~ Aldrean Treu Peri, Neo-Moon Guardian ~

See you, Space Cowboy! ...and happy birthday to Dinah :)

As a fanfic reader, who prefers Batman-shippers about Black Canary (rather than Wonder Woman), I say: "Bang-up job!"

Sweet!

The Bat is cool.