| Reviews for The Color of Rust |
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  ASickGame chapter 2 . 11/22/2018 3 |
| JimChou chapter 2 . 3/28/2016 Just discovered your two chapters. That was amazing! So heartwarming. So sad to think you would not go on with your project... There is so much potential here; you should really continue! And tell us what happened when El met the teacher who said the picture was too good! |
 ShinobiTwin05 chapter 2 . 10/24/2014 Guurrrggh... The FEELS! So much Feels! I'm choking on the fluff! I Love this story! |
| daisesndaffidols chapter 1 . 4/11/2014 Poor Neal.. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/10/2014 I love this story! Sorry I didn't start reading it sooner. Please write more very soon. |
| ocgirl.fr chapter 2 . 4/9/2014 Heartbreaking, poor Neal :( You are really doing great, I can't wait for more ! :) |
| ocgirl.fr chapter 1 . 4/9/2014 Aaaw! This was just perfect ! Loved your characterization . |
| caseylf123 chapter 2 . 4/8/2014 How adorable. You just want to pick Neal up and squeeze the stuffing out of him. If only Peter and El could keep him. Keep 'em coming. |
| caseylf123 chapter 1 . 4/8/2014 Finally got to read this and it was amazing. So heart wrenching. I really hope you add many more chapters because I absolutely loved it. Great job! |
| Gloworm41 chapter 2 . 4/8/2014 That is just so sad but so wonderful that hehas Peter and El in his life. Most excellent job! |
| JeanneZ84 chapter 2 . 4/8/2014 The Burke's If I know them,they will get on to a way to keep Neal. He loves them very mom don't care about him. I love the excitement Neal has. JeanneZ84 |
| NYWCgirl chapter 2 . 4/8/2014 Nice story, a kid that doesnt know McD? Wow, LOL |
| Guestt chapter 1 . 4/8/2014 Okay its great, it really is but im confused - why does this say possible slash if theyve been presented as parents/child? Because if this is some wierd turn into incest...no thanks. Otherwise im all for it. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/8/2014 hahaha. okay so wierdly enough just yesterday i was thinking id love to read a fic where the real neal in younger form was around the burkes without losing his own self, as he often does in other fics. and heres this little jewel youve cooked up :) Its cute, thats for sure. I love little neal and teen neal. Both seem equally endearing in how vulnerable and quietly talented and beatifully strong they are; that hes sensitive fits the canon neal's nature- the poor guy never has it easy, cant blame him for crying at times. I just think you could zoom in on neals natural mischievousness and butterfinger side too. hes the artist and the conman; the mutlitalented charmer with a penchant for everything, a love and curiosity for life and knowledge and passion and that makes his impulsive, tantrum throwing uncontrolled side work too. So if you ever want to work with these, go ahead |
| Midlo chapter 2 . 4/8/2014 Love it. You are doing a great job. |
