Reviews for On the Ship
Fluval66 chapter 2 . 11/16/2014
Hey great story. I wish there was more.
FaBbEr0oZ chapter 2 . 7/18/2014
Update?
NoaMcCool chapter 2 . 7/11/2014
Loving the story. Please continue it. I'm hooked and I need more :)
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 2 . 4/16/2014
Come on Regina you know exactly what it is, why are you so afraid. Please continue.
ShipHappens chapter 2 . 4/15/2014
Love this clever angle! Thank uuuuu!
AtticusMontag chapter 2 . 4/15/2014
I really love this story!
LauratheChef chapter 2 . 4/10/2014
definitely explore more about what is slowly developing between Emma and Regina including their united magic
BlueTigress chapter 2 . 4/10/2014
Love it that you continue this story! I love it when their magic gets all tangled up with another! :D loveee it! It's sooo intimate! :D really funny the comment about the Hogwarts houses! :p
Andrea316 chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Keep going please
CAMxx chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Keep going!
are you kidding chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
of course kee going , its good.I would love to see the intimate magic link between these two
sulima chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Good Story!

I like how you have set up the context of them both being quite antogonistic to one another, and how smething moves them to subtly, slowly, start connecting.

I think you have a very good thing going on here.

Personally, I see it as both of them being aware that only True Love's magic can be the reason why they have worked together so far, but they have yet to be fully aware that this is what they are feeling. You know? As if, at this moment, true love for them was an imposition, something they have not yet come to terms with. You could really develop a good story about how this evolves, with Regina teaching Emma how to control magic, amd Emma showing Regina how to trust in others.

I would really like to read the following chapters if you decide to keep on writing this tale!
LauratheChef chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
keep going the true love angle is a good one to continue with
Wissa38 chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Oh you have to continue! Wonderful start. You have to let them be together eventually. Please?
BlueTigress chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Keep going! :D great start! :D l
their magic feeling intimate is such a sweet concept
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