First her eyes are moss green and now silver? Btw her eyes are described being kind of silver

Already in love with this story! So cute

The spells not completely right but I'm lazy so...

(2) is wrong
this how it should be written; Ξόρκι του ήλιου, απάντα στο κάλεσμά μου, σπάσε!

Great

Thanks for making me cry -_- ("IT'S A WHALE", AS LEO WOULD SAY!) But Awesome story, I loved it! :D

Wieeeee :)) Still like it even if its short XD

Aww. Nice moment between them. However, I think one of the conditions of Artemis' oath to be a maiden was that she could take it back if she changed her mind so I highly doubt she would have lost her immortality.

Wwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Finally she found him! XDDD Ultimate happiness!..And don't worry even I love cliffhangers (A bit sadist)...but that cliffhanger couldn't be left hanging so Update sooner :))

Hope you use my idea for sibling bonding.

This Story is amazing! I love the sibling bond between Apollo and Artemis. Hope Apollo's plan goes to plan.
Keep Having Ideas

ooh yes please! More stories about Apollo would be great :)

Oh sure, You can write one-shots and stuffs about Gods...I really love the gods (In a fanatic way)...

Yes, I loved the chapter, please another. I would love you to write little stories about the gods, especially Apollo and Artemis.
kisses

I think you should write one-shots. Be sure to include some about Hestia. She's my favorite god but is neglected for being a minor god.