I am suing you for making an exact copy of your other fic :p

It's mostly just the ending of Earthbound, except the kissing part. It is a good story overall. (Paula doesn't have Healing) Good job with this story!

If this is not a oneshot more chapters would be nice...

I think you did an exellent job on this story, and look foward to many more, I like how you take into account the personalities of each character, and use them in great detail. However, I did see a couple spelling errors, nothing major, and maybe make them a little longer? Maybe also throw in some of the scenery of the places such as the bustle of fourside, the dark skies of Onett, you have made many good fanfic's, and I know there are many more to come! Happy writing!
-naco26withcheese

I think you did an exellent job on this story, and look foward to many more, I like how you take into account the personalities of each character, and use them in great detail. However, I did see a couple spelling errors, nothing major, and maybe make them a little longer? Maybe also throw in some of the scenery of the places such as the bustle of fourside, the dark skies of Onett, you have made many good fanfic's, and I know there are many more to come! Happy writing! .
-naco26withcheese

Your mom

Amazing job!