Nuuuuu, pwease gimme a chapter of what happens nextttttt

So good! I was hoping for a sequel though. Keep writing and Ganbatte! ;)

Wonder how long it took Shion to catch on . . .most likely till it just naturally went back to normal.

This is really cute and funny.

That was such a TEASE!

A well-written, emotional one...But a tease none the less. *pouts*

Ehhhhh, this is awesome please write some moree. You captured both of their personalities perfectly

I love this I think it went really well!
I think even if shion did eventually have sex with nezumi he would still be innocent ahaha I don't think he can help it !
But yes I really like this!