| Reviews for The Phoenix |
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TheTrueAnonymousOne chapter 11 . 1/28/2018 I enjoyed this until you decided to take MMA matches and add pro wrestling concepts into it... |
Gold Testament chapter 4 . 1/26/2018 Hopefully Raw's going to give Davis a couple weeks off to fully recover and relax from the high of victory. |
Gold Testament chapter 2 . 1/26/2018 Yeah get Davis used to enduring and defending against Veemon's Veeheadbutt attack, and then sparring with X-Veemon. Maybe Stingmon as well for speed. |
Wolf3n chapter 11 . 12/10/2017 Wicked loved the whole story |
PinoGC chapter 11 . 8/3/2014 Dude this was an awesome story keep them coming |
Jon Voris chapter 11 . 7/13/2014 *I'M* *DYING* *TO* *READ* *THE* *SEQUEL* ! How 'Bout, Myotismon Coming Back From The Dead, *AGAIN*, The Guy Won't Stay Dead, So Why Not ? That Said, You're *STILL* 150/5 Stars ;) |
Jojita Joestar chapter 11 . 6/25/2014 Good story. |
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 11 . 6/24/2014 Cool:). Well done! |
Show Expert 1 chapter 11 . 6/24/2014 That's it I was expecting more just something that made it longer |
NinjaFang1331 chapter 11 . 6/23/2014 Well that's the end of the story. |
Jon Voris chapter 10 . 6/5/2014 I *DAMN* *LOVE* *THIS* *TO* *DEATH* ! I Really, *REALLY* Love Where This Story Is Going ;) That Said, 150/5 Stars ;) P.S. Just 'Cause I Love DaiKari Kids, How About That Condom Having A Pinhole? ;) |
Ultrasonic215 chapter 10 . 6/1/2014 HAHAHAHA! YOU TOOK MY ADVICE! THANK YOU FOR DOING THAT! WHOOO! THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FANFICS I EVER READ! |
canuck72 chapter 10 . 5/30/2014 I feel the need to warn you that you should immediately change the rating of this story, or remove chapter 10 and edit it to appease the story's current rating. A full out sex scene should not be included in a story rated T, and it goes against the rules and guidelines of fanfiction. You should rectify this error before your story is reported for violating its stated rating. |
Psycho G chapter 10 . 5/30/2014 Nice chapter here. Clearly Basilisk's words about ending Davis' career backfired and his ended along with his spine. You have a talent in writing detailed matches and scenes, an art that many writers lack which causes their fanfics to falter. The lemon scene between Davis and Kari was nicely writing and I like that you didn't use vulgar and crude terminologies to describe what was happening. Such use of vulgar terminologies to me kill the feel and intimacies of such scenes. With the way things are going, it feels like you're about to wrap things up with this fanfic soon; or I could be mistaken. Either way, nice work with this fanfic and continue in always making your works better than before. |
Show Expert 1 chapter 10 . 5/30/2014 Greatest chapter yet I can't wait to see what else is going on |