Ohh mann i love how you made this story!

more please lol call me crazy but I have a thing for the qunari

Just what I was looking for!
Well written, I love the interaction between them, it is exactly how I would imagine him to be. Kept me interested all the way through, and made me smile often. Good work!

Thank you!

This story had me squealing every chapter at one point I even started crying from happiness! How could I have not found this sooner:D

For the love of the Creators, write more!

Love it! Can't wait for more, let me know it u still need a beta.

Love it can't wait to read more please update soon.

really good chapter but zevran quit the crows when he failed to kill the warden in dragon age origins now he's on the run because 'nobody quits the crows'

definitely added to my favorites! cannot wait for upcoming chapters!

Love the first 3 chapters; can't wait to read more.

To my comment for chapter three. I have seen now that you separating the most scenes. But you have don't do it for all.

Yay more :D
A few oversights but otherwise... sadly I'm not so good in english that I could help you more. *
I hope we have not to wait too long for the next chapter(s) ;)
But you should make the changes in the scenes more clearly. With a line or so. It's a bit confusing when it changes suddenly.

A little fast forward. But I know you rushed through the plot in the game to get faster to the next part. ;) And the Arishok/Qunari are OOC but no complain from here :D And I like your Hawke even if you do not see much of her yet.
I Love this pairing to death...I wish I could do this in the game. But no, I alway must give him Isabella (Fighting is not an option for me for several reasons)
I have seen one or two errors...but nothing major or worthy of remembrance. Only one: It is Par Vollen
I hope we see more soon :D