| Reviews for Kill the Dark Lord and the Puppeteer! |
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   morgannac64 chapter 19 . 9/1 there, their, they'rethree different words! other than multiple spelling mistakes I liked the story. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/30 Why in your otherwise-brilliant story did you decide to arbitrarily chance point-of-view (POV) IN THE MIDDLE OF THE STORY? Ugh. Don't do that. That's bad. Don't do that. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/30 Oh, honey, you have a wonderful imagination but honestly, you need to go back to English classes. There is a huge difference between "there", "their", and "they're", and common words are not capitalized in the middle of sentences. Apostrophes have rules, too - please look them up...especially the one about NOT using apostrophes to pluralize nouns... (it's "bodies", not "body's"..."families", not "family's"). SMH. How can you write so well with absolutely no grasp of common grammar and punctuation rules? |
| Steffy4s3 chapter 19 . 5/23 Extremely well written with a high level of angst. You had me captivated and enthralled. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/17 The story must had ended at least two chapters before. But as you are a moronic gay had to keep writing stupidity. Is clear why no story of yours is finish. Your stupidity has no limit thanks God you are gone. |
| gabzep chapter 19 . 4/24 Sorry Dumbledore but it was for the Greater Good! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/21 What trustworthy? They're bankers. Doing your job is the basic that anyone can do, not a very generous thing to do. Would you allow your banker, that you met 2 mins ago to be your secret keeper? I'm sorry, I can't continue this story. Great premise but absolutely no effort. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/21 Floo not flew Parseltounge not parceltounge Fidelius charm not fideless. Just google the spellings if you don't know... |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/21 He is already asking dobby to do so much magic, he could easily habe him change his hair color and I'm sure that mrs. Granger would already have some make-up in her bags. This could've been a great story but you seem to have made only a bare minimum effort to write this and the plot is sooo lazy. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/21 Atrocious spellings aside, how did kreacher go from killing the horcrux to being stabbed by the sword? Just because you wanted him dead? Could've put a bit of work into that, no? Just because you wanted a character dead, you just said they're dead, end of story, no why or how. Lol. |
| GatorLHA2 chapter 19 . 4/10 Well written and entertaining story. |
| Pixie8859 chapter 1 . 4/1 Nope...I give up! |
| Pixie8859 chapter 1 . 4/1 Every so often you come across a story that is so riddled with errors that you have to read it to believe it. This is definitely one of those. Formatting, spelling, grammar, paragraphs, you name it, it's in here. I'm still trying to work out what is going on. But I'll stick with it, it might actually turn out to be a decent story...we'll see |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/9 Hj |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/24 Interesting start! Worthy of many more reviews imho |
