Reviews for Fall from grace!
TotalAlaskan chapter 10 . 8/13/2019
Wow wow wow was this good! Excellently written and great plot/development. Definitely going in my favorites!
Guest chapter 10 . 12/9/2017
Dude!
That was amazing!
Luv2Co chapter 10 . 7/2/2016
Too bad we don't have pictures. Loved the story. Thank you again for sharing.
Luv2Co chapter 6 . 7/2/2016
I am sitting here thinking what the..they disarmed the bombs. Very clever. Thank you for sharing. On to the next chapter
MerryLittleMess chapter 10 . 3/15/2016
I loved it, especially the last chapter, which was hilarious!
Kathy Franklin chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
This was absolutely a fabulous story! It kept my full attention the whole way through. I was terrified like everyone else when that crane exploded and fell, my heart was in my throat! You paint such a wonderful story that I felt I was actually there. So glad that news lady got fired, no compassion at all. You hurt my Sammy but you put him back together. Your writing, spelling and punctuation was spot-on. Makes reading a story pleasant. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. I'm new to the Flashpoint fandom and always hungry for Sam/hurt stories.
Bookdancer chapter 10 . 5/1/2015
Hey, thanks for making me laugh there at the end! I'll admit, I had already guessed that Sam rescuing a cat was the reason for his appearance back in the prologue, but I wasn't expecting the calendar... And I loved the worry from all of the team in the last few chapters... Everyone seemed properly characterized, as well, so great job!
hi chapter 10 . 5/11/2014
Just thought to tell you that your story is hilarious yet heart-stopping at moments. In other words, it was amazing! Keep on writing!
Padria95 chapter 10 . 5/11/2014
Oh my gosh! I freaking absolutely adore this! You had me RIVETED when the crane fell and I was like "... NO! What about Sam!" I loved this. Loved it. I especially loved that you didn't kill him, but that you he didn't come out completely unscathed. What a hero! Ha, I also loved all of the humor in this last chapter, and the bit in the previous chapter with "sonofabitch blew up my sierra perch!" That was beautiful. I really really hope you write more hurt/heroic adventures of Sam and the team!
smuffly chapter 10 . 4/13/2014
*Oh*, the awful cat jokes... hehehe.

I really enjoyed this story, even though it's not one of my usual fandoms, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next, or in whose sandbox you suddenly pop up! Mahala the Ninja - where will she strike?
smuffly chapter 9 . 4/13/2014
Great chapter! Loved the humour as Sam struggled to regain his memory of where he was and what had happened. Yay for happy endings, too, especially those with a touch of the bittersweet. That last scene was so atmospheric.
Ghostwriter chapter 10 . 4/12/2014
Awesome work. I love it. Catch ya on the flip side.
Santiaga chapter 10 . 4/12/2014
Yes, it was a very good story. Until the last chapter and the epilogue, sorry.
I got the impression that the author has lost interest in his story immediately after intense chapters. I understand that it is difficult to write the end of the story when the most interesting is already written, and further course of events is obvious. But that is no reason to castrate such a good story. You are a good writer. You could do this qualitatively, I'm sure. But you chose to do it that way, as if you pulled out a few pages of this story.
And, my God ... Fall from height ... Drowning ...Ten minutes without breathing and heartbeat. And he has a dislocated shoulder and a bump on the head. What's next? Sam accidentally gets in the epicenter of a nuclear explosion and get a little dizzy and a eyewinker? This is funfiction but not a science fiction. And Sam as a character that we know and love - is just a man of flesh and blood. Not made of steel or titanium. Any person after what you did for him, will get multiple bone fractures and ruptures internal organs. Coma. Dozens of operations. Brain damage. Half a year of recovery. But certainly not Sam. After all, he has some cryptic special training. Ha-ha.
I always calmly read such nonsense from bad writers. But you are is a very good writer! I'm sure you can make your next stories as exciting, but not so far from a reality.
Sorry for my grammar mistakes, I do not know much English...
Diana chapter 10 . 4/12/2014
Eghm... It was a very nice story, really, - intense, convincing, well-paced - until the "epilogue". I was looking forward to a chapter of more or less accurate medical details, ready to count minutes Sam was under - it really makes a huge difference if it is 5 mins or 10 mins (I doubt they would really want to resuscitate in the latter case, hence Greg was playing "unsure" card), and hypotermia can also have an impact on the outcome.

Instead I got an "epilogue", which is, while decently written, seems to be glued to the story artificially. I would appreciate a couple of more chapters in between. There is no need to make it standard H/c stuff we get here - make it medically acceptable and see how different it would progress.

Anyway, I enjoyed the story and I would certainly like more.
Thanks!
Sewtunes chapter 10 . 4/11/2014
The humor in this chapter is awesome. I laughed all the way through. Love how Sam got the last laugh on the Team. I'm so glad you finally explained the scratches on his face when that day had first started.
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