Absolutely lovely. I couldn't stop smiling. Angsty but lightly enough to be happy anyway - amazing writing, amazing accuracy in the characters, silly without being ridiculous - I just ugh. Amazing.

Omg this was so adorable! I loved it all why can't this really happen!? Erick grrrs why couldn't you just rip shaw's arms off instead?! Ugh Cherick fan forever! lol

Bittersweet. Lovely work.

This entire story, and this last chapter especially, is so touching and beautiful in a very bittersweet way. I just about teared up while reading it. Poor Erik, so stunned at having a nightmare-free sleep and feeling that he "can't love." And poor Charles, feeling so hopeful and certain of good things, when Erik is so certain of the opposite. I really hope you'll write more Charles/Erik stuff, because you do it so well!

Wow. What a wonderful end to a magnificent story! I love how you handled Cuba. So many people go into a ridiculous amount of detail about it, but I thought it was perfect how you skimmed and focused on what was truly important-Erik, his emotions and his regret. Really well done. The final segment with the photos made me tear up a little :) Congrats on a great story!

Oh My...! It was so sad D: Erik, why?! D:
Excellently narrated, you knew how to capture the essence of the characters very well *-*
thanks for sharing :D

I'm really enjoying this story. Great characterizations and I'm loving Erik's development. The whole thing is bittersweet. Well done.

I continue to be stunned at how good this story is. The opening scene of the two of them slowly waking up in bed together just made me melt from the feels. Yet at the same time, it's kinda sad to see them growing closer, because we all know what's going to happen between them. Are you still planning to make this a four-chapter story? Because it's also sad to know that there's only one chapter left! I don't want this to end!

Amazing chapter as always! You write these characters so well :) I hope you write more with them in the future after this story is complete. I love how you handle their emotions and interactions, particularly Erik and Charles. They are all very in character and written so very well! I can't wait to see what happens next(unless this is the last day...?)

I'm really impressed by the mix of humor and angst in this chapter. Also by how even though the focus is on Charles and Erik, you include the rest of X-Men too, and write them all so well. I love the whole thing, but the last scene is my favorite for how intimate and tender it is. 3 Can't wait to read more!

Poor Erik :'( can't wait to see what happens. Next. Can't wait for the happy memory part ;D if you add it

Amazing, AMAZING chapter. You write these characters so absolutely perfectly it is such a joy to read! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter. :) I love the depth you put into Eriks thoughts and the slips when thinking Charles is sexy lol;D

Wow, this is simply a marvelous story - one of the best Charles/Erik ones that I've read so far. The interaction that you write between them, especially their dialogue, is so subtle and just spot-on. I can't believe you're new to this pairing, because you write them like you're an old pro. I rarely find fics this good, so please update soon!

This fic is absolutely magnificent and beautifully done. It's written from the heart and soul and the emotions are so clear in everything. I love how you write Erik and Charles-Erik's reluctance and frustration. You make him seem more normal and less a monster, or always consumed by his rage and nightmares as he is in other stories. You normalize him but also allow us to appreciate the extraordinary sides of him too. Really, really well done. I can't wait to see where this goes!