its good

Nice and sweet. I enjoyed it.
Just one point of critisism, if I may: you switch a lot between tenses, past and present. it's confusing and distracting from the story you want to tell. Which is too bad, really.

Wow, this was hilarious and hot at the same time. Well done. :)

This was pretty good. The pacing could have been smoother at times, and I think Deeks seemed a little bit too unsure/foolish, especially given the way he was in the restaurant in the scene, but overall it was solid.

One thing, though. The word is spelled incendiary. Just FYI (in case you want to fix the title).

Holy shit that was hot.

Love it :p