Now the suspense begins... This is turning quite interesting. I hope that Tsubasa and Kyoya will make it in time or else...

Dun dun dun!

It looks like the killer planned the whole thing and killed to of the OCs. Thank god that Gina's name doesn't start with a T but I think she might die in the next chapters. Keep up the good work and I know. Writer's Block sucks but at least you beat it and managed to keep writing. Keep up the good work.

Dang, this was such a cool chapter and I can't believe 2 OC's are already dead. And my thoughts on Alec, I don't think he should be dead but that's up to you; I mean you're the author of this fanfic and it's pretty much your decision so yeah. Well anyways, great chapter and can't wait for the next! ;)

oh fucker...this story is getting better and better
Can't wait for the next chapter

Yay! You updated! This chapter kept me on the edge I my seat the entire time. As for who's in danger, I'm going to have to go with Taylor out of a sense. I hope you can update soon, I must know what happens next!

i like it :) please update soon.

Oooo. What will happen next? Also, you got Mana down.

Ugh! I'm such an idiot! I forgot to read and review this when the chapter came out. Sorry for the late review. I liked how you introduced the OCs. I liked how you introduced Gina. She was in character the whole time! (eventhough she didn't have a realy big part) Poor Nile! Seeing his friend die like that :(

Finally! You updated! Yay! :D Wooowww... This was AWESOME! Dude, I never knew you could write so awesome! Especially the characterization. Diamante was so perfectly IC, I have never seen anyone else descibe her so perfectly. I myself fail to keep her in character. You did an awesome job, bro!
As for the plot, it seems even more amazing in this chapter! I'm so worried about Xorn and Alec! Please be okay, guys! I loved Cecilia's pov, Taylor's too. Honestly, amongst your OCs, Xorn and Cecilia are my favorites. I don't understand why Taylor doesn't like Xorn. He is amazing! Must be some personal thing, right? XD
Anyways, I totally agree on another thing. DO NOT accept so many OCs, especially when it's your first. I had to delete my first OC story just because of the overwhelming number of OCs because I simply lost track of their personalities and appearances. -_-
Anyways, good luck with future chapters. If you need any help, don't hesitate to ask me. Update soon! Sayonara!
-Liz

Poor Demure...Hope you update soon:)

Actually, that was a really good chapter. I can't wait for more

This was a great chapter and I cannot believe that Demure is dead... Then again more characters including the OCs are going to die (which is fine with me because I never thought about seeing Ninel die and I want to see how it's like when I read it). Keep up the amazing work.

No, no it as actually good; don't think bad of your fanfic. I honestly thought it was well written out and I liked how you've portrayed Frieda, my OC. Overall, this was a cool and interesting chapter and I can't wait for more! :)

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OMG NICE! I'll PM u an OC like, now!

Just sent my OC! But wow! That was dark (in a good way though) I almost felt like I was the one who was being ripped apart by the chainsaw. That makes me wonder if that's what it feels like to be murdered :o. Well anyway, Happy Birthday! And I hope you accept my OC!