Great chapter.

I can't réad this. She just lost her family and she"s giggling and singing like nothing happenned

Omg honestly Jacob is a lot more bitchy now. He shouldn't be letting Jordon off so easily with the things shes been doing. Going to Forks without telling any pack memebers knowing there may be leeches around, now making HIS pack keep secrets and hide away causing everyone to lose focus on defending the land and tribe. He honestly needs to grow a pair. I don't get why he lost them as soon as he imprinted. I still enjoy the story here and there though. I just feel he needs to put her in her place and make her understand more about things and not be a push over about it.

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ANIM AL IN STICTS MIIRI ROAR ANJD CRUNCH! So as all of them from around the planet Stinging like a WASP Spiling venom SUPER SAILOR HAAKONA! gasp as all of them as all henshined you are in fact a Power Ranger sailor soldier with as most of you with as all of them no way we can't die go elderly then too late blewe apart with young/pets brought here we report she woke her planet crystalized beast powers but these are dead atomized then were forbidden top return wee did then blew as all of them had them wiped out then suddenly mos more as all guaeds then came too late mutatednow us/knights were taught to battle b lowen from sliced throats brought then lost to age looked youth as a girl so he with them as all of them unable to be killed wholliest was now but was real now 2018-2382 came still the same the humans were buried supernatural took over followed with us/all sliced now onto Vulcan forbidden to live us/as all most all but things deportede from help then that stopped livijg but n ever died but had stopped aging ten caused us/knights were immortal forever young again Alice they took Earth from us/all now had stopped from it all n ow was in fact Eternal now werecut from Earth anymore thenstranded onto a alien world Jordan gasp you tamed it is true they know what her gift is Animal telepathy yes I Have it then now asleep then were as all were more smashed b rought here Master they are dead they defected to Vulcan via her son's powers so they blew apart good bring them then too late jailed then killed from here now too late myself had looked older Alice they did it to me myself was a Beastmaster oh my god you never grew old now unable to return to Earth now last human s fled with last animals blown with us/all b ought here now cut from here.

Super duper awesome!

Ummm...no. After getting a tattoo, you're supposed to let it heal. That means no beach, no sun, and no ocean water. Even your tattoo artist will tell you how to correctly perform tattoo aftercare. Follow it to the T so your tattoo stay beautiful and vibrant longer.

Not calling the police after a murder just asking her to stay with him and she accepts. Not calling her relatives to announce them of her parent's deaths... This story doesn't make any sense.

I really tried so hard to read this story. But it's so confusing. I mean I don't understand half of what's going g on half the time and find myself just flipping g through to a part I can understand. I'm completely missing the whole story. I loved the beginning. It seemed to be a really good story, but I think the plot is getting lost in all of the nonsense I'm the story. I'm sorry.

YES! YES! OH THANK SWEET BABY JESUS! *sobbing intensely while throwing food at you* TAKE ALL THE FOOD! HAVE IT ALL YOU GLORIOUS BEING!

God I love this so much!

*stilll sobbing*

Oh wow. Crazy ending. Bittersweet was hoping to see her pregnant but this was nice too.

I love Japanese. watashi wa tsukare te iru.

Jacob Epharaim Black

Actually I think that he doesn't need to find a bridge... He could just build one and get over it... After Jordan has cried him a river to cross first. hahaha

Is she pregnant?

I SWEAR TO MADARA, IF SHE IS PREGGERS WITH THAT JERK'S BABY, I WILL BURN YOUR FRIDGE AND PANTRY AND MAKE YOU WATCH!

I'm sorry Madara, but I'm going to have to move you put of the way so I can get to this *squint* author.

I do love this story, but I will find you. And take away all your food.