you wanted it here I'm done

the story is really good. i hoped to read more chapter.

Realmente no se que decir odio cuando ponen a Minato como el malo cuando realmenete es uno de lo mejores personajes de Naruto, por no decir el mejor, pero tengo que admitir que es muy buena historia y me están gustando aún que aún me duele que minato sea el malo

Kurenai se volvio Yandere.

Too many spineless characters (Kakashi)... this story was good right up to chapter nineteen, after that after that it became a series of deus ex machina to keep the bad guys alive and the good guys stupid and unable to act without letting their enemies make the first move...

Moronic characters are so hard to read... Kushina knows Min ago is going to go after her kids one she's out of the way... but she kindly steroids side and let's him do exactly as he looks, anyway... I think half my brain cells died while reading this chapter.

Overall, the story is decent, but the constant stupidity and passivity displayed by the 'good guys' is ridiculous.

This Konoha is way worst than North Korea.

Interesting idea but too fast paced at places. Other times it is too confusing of what is happening. The lady 5ish chapters kinda killed the story of me.

I can think of no better person to be against Minatory than Itachi, the guy's a genius.

Your suck a good writer but at the the same time I hate you you leave so many Clif hangers, everyone other than minanto is super weak than you say it's a haram but it barely there there way to much plot

Interesting story story I can’t wait to read the next chapter.

Are you gonna finish this story

Really, really hope this story hasn't been abandoned. Was a really good read!

Great chapter looking forward to more

Crap