I know it's been over 5 years but damn I just breathed this story in

How did they know that she was the one raised by Tom? and how did the ministry know she was there b4 she would even have told them who she was?

the reference has to be when, in the GOF, snape caught fawcett and a guy from hufflepuff kissing at the garden in the yule ball!

just a little problem, whitout harry or hex giving hermione the flute how did she get past fluffy?

I'm really impressed. I love that your staying true to the characters and not changing them too much. And I'm glad you gave harry a unique love interest without changing him

Congratulations! Technically Alexis is canon!

Funny thing too because she had actually had a kid with Voldemort

omg I love peeves in this, I hope Snape wont be bashed in this as he's one of my favourite characters

Firstly, you're making terrible errors with some names:
You say "Flich" when it is actually FILCH
You say "Lusius" when it is actually LUCIUS
Secondly, though not such a big issue, for some reason, you gave Mad Eye the dialogue of "lassie". I know it is sometimes hard for non-Brits to distinguish accents, but for Alistor Moody, his accent is Midlands to West Country, not a place where the word "lassie" is typically used. I think you're mistaking his accent for Scottish, which it certainly is not. I know that one is an easy mistake to make for Americans, so I don't really blame you. Besides these notes, I love your plot and the story is intriguing, I will continue reading for sure!

Really good story! I'm really surprised you don't have more reviews. I'm looking forward to reading the next ones.

I knew it! I knew he was Moody's nephew. When you hinted at it, with the "uncle taught me" thing. And him being all paranoid. YES! I'm smart! -dances- :v Heck yeah!
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Ok, I'll stop now :v

Hey there writer... Amyroxx123 here... as my name already states... anyway just started reading your series and I am amazed by your character portraying... it's quite good and I never imagined peeves as an old guy and didn't even see him in the movies... I always tot him as young boy like Fred and George who loved pranking people... And when in the books lupin teaches him a lesson it's like scolding a little boy... And my opinion on swine is that he is a swine... though I think every story needs a character like that... I havnt read further chapter so I donno what this character implies... And hope u finish the 5th book soon coz I am very fast reader so I might be reading it in 3 to 4 days... keep posting and cheers. P. S can I borrow peeves character for my story... I was going to use him later but i got an idea for current chapter inspired by you... so may I... if you do so plz send me a pm and then only I old continue writing... And my story is Lilliana and the sorcerers stone.

Fantastic story. Just one note: To say "I love you" in Spanish, it is "Te amo" not "Amo tú". Other than that great job.

Just noticed this and wanted to tell you this. When Poppy and Alexis first talk, you wrote Algus not Albus

Cliche story

More minor details. Harry was visiting the mirror for nearly a week before dumbledore ran him off. Speculation is Ron told the headmaster because he made the comment about harry becomming scary obsessive over what looked to be a dark artifact which had given the redhead and harry both nightmares about never having what was shown.