Lovely well-developed story. Nice work.

Really effective chapter that show the emotional unfurling and blossoming of their rimantic relationship. Well done. There are some minor punctuation problems throughout, i.e.
Sherlocks eye's should be Sherlock's eyes.

*mad cackling as I spin in my computer chair*

Really enjoyed this. Well written and decent plot. Well done!

That was awesome!

I enjoyed the story, though I'm sure there were at least a few readers, if not most, who like me determined that the purple ribbon around the woman's neck was indicative of Sherlock's sexy purple shirt from the go.

Oh this was so beautiful :) I enjoyed every second of it

This was great. A bit of an odd development but it was effective and not at all too assuming and too fast-paced. This was done measurably fitting. :))

im loving this story! very gripping! also i find it hard to find good fics that arent AU and are a ood length so thank you for this! A/N's are a bit scary though

Wow! This story was incredibly hot! I've been reading so many stories here, and there were many great ones, but yours is the first that brought me to post a review! I like your choice of words, and the way you describe the feelings between them without letting them act out of character. Every time I start reading a new chapter, in between seconds I was immersed in your story. In case of grammatical errors I want to apologise, because I'm from germany and my english lessons date back several years. :-) Whatever, great work! I'm hoping for a sequel! :-)

This was an amazing story- I love the way you write! I'm looking forward to reading more of your fanfiction- please continue writing :)

Anasuya

This was such a wonderful treat to read. I loved it, from beginning to end. Amazing! 3

This story... Oh my god. I'm new to the Sherlock fandom but not new to fan fiction. I thought I'd check some Sherlock slash out and holy shit am I glad I did! You are an excellent writer and did an absolutely marvoulous job of capturing sherlocks and wastosn's personality! I loved this fanfic you did a TREMENDOUS job. Bloody bravo mate!

I have to admit...I read this twice. It's so lovely and so far my favorite Johnlock story :). Your characterization was spot on and the descriptions of everything were just wonderful. Thank you for writing it!

I am so glad I stumbled across this! You missy made me miss my lunch! I could not put this down until I finished it then suddenly I realized I was starving (and surely no one should read Johnlock too long on an empty stomach as those two are always eating something haha)
I really really enjoyed this fiction! It was fun and true to character all the way done to those lovely sexy bits! You have a brilliant writing style that just flows and dives and dances and I really enjoyed it. The level of detail was immersive and I really wanted to know how it ended (thus the hunger pains aha!)
I have added you to my favourites and will now stalk you to read more of your works. You have such a flair for writing and character development I hope you do write yourself a book, I know I would snatch it up in a second!

Best wishes and kindest hugs (though sad it's over now)

Wolfie x