Castiel . . . Cas . . . he's done somethin'

I can see it. He's already started screwing around with things. There's just a taste of stuff being not quite right.

WHAT is in that envelope but, more importantly, what's up with Crowley?

Deannnnnnn. One of those times he's being an ass . . . by mistake. haha Yeah, I saw that. He wasn't TRYING to douche. He just sorta did.

Alissa can swing by to visit the fam. She's headed up that way anyway.

Although . . . to be fair . . . switching off your phone when a fellow Hunter is calling you jus because you don't want to deal with him seems like a spectacularly bad idea. What if he's calling for a reason. A real reason. A: "Demon on your tail. He wants to eat your entrails" sorta thing. haha

Wake Up - Wake Up

No time to sleep. You can rest when you're dead.

Don't ask. lol Nice chapter!

Alyse strikes me as kinda cold. She's very matter-of-fact. One hell of a jaded hunter; nothing touches her deeply enough to care.

Alissa, however, is the total opposite. She's sassy and spirited and I'm already liking where she's going character-wise. Soooooo much to work with!

With that tiny bit you've told me already, THIS line stands out: "I won't go through it again . . . no one deserves to experience those horrors."

COBALT. STRONG start. How you know it's a strong start is that I am not kidding when I said reading your chapter 1 has motivated me to move to chapter 2. :D I'mma liking this.

I think I'm hooked already

So so good. You're amazingly talented. :)

AAAAAHHHH CHAPTER! Loving the sass master Amber, I think I know what's happening with the angels and all of the weird shit going on... Angry Alissa is my favourite Alissa.

Keep up the good work honey, push forward and power through the writers blocks (happens to even the best of yous). xx ttyl :)

And now for the chapter you actually asked me about...haha. Loved Amber/Aza and Cas conversation. It really added another facet to your story. :) I also like the fact that Amber notices something about Cas having feelings for Alissa. Anyway, I'm really terrible at reviews, but it was a great chapter. (insert cliche can't wait for your next update here)

It's obvious that you've put a lot of thought and heart into your story. It deserves more attention than it's gotten. So here's my review for everything up until now. I appreciate your attention to detail. Like I told you before, it allows us, the readers, to know exactly what's going on in your head which helps us understand your story better. Does that make sense? haha. I'm impressed with how you can keep two OCs so in character. A lot of people have trouble differentiating between more than one or the characters are so similar they don't really stand on their own. Amber and Alissa are distinct which is nice to see. And the twist with Amber being a demon! Dun. Dun. Dunnnnn.

Oooooooh, this has gotta keep going. I've got a few inklings of what might happen and what's up but I cant say incase I'm wrong and start making theories that aren't right and make myself sad that they won't come true! Anyway, keep on truckin with this fic, I see the potential! Luv u xx ttyl ;)

Good story so far.

this is good and seems very entertaining!