THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!

i laughed so many times and i loved the story. im glad that it ended good. keep up the good work ! ; )

aiiiiieeeee this was really cute! The pace was good, there was plenty of time for their relationship to develop (even though it was just one weekend) and the way you changed the pace, like from them running (like girls) to Marco and Jean being in the storage closet, was so fluid! I also loved the little hints to canon-SnK, like Sasha's Would You Rather question to Mikasa, and their school names were good ahah. Plus the end was beautiful ;u;

I do have a little nitpick though (because I'm a nasty who nitpicks): at one point, you mentioned that Jean was Connie's ride home, but in the end, Connie trudges to his own car... y ea

Anyway, this was so so good, and I enjoyed reading all 13k words of it! Keep writing, you write really well! :D

Damn. This is one heck of a cool story