La verdad es que empezaste bien,pero termino siendo muy confuso,revuelto y molestamente complejo.
Aqui te pongo una serie de cinco grandes recomendaciones,borra el original y rediseñale en un reboot
.El Personaje de Scar,cuyo nombre original seria Alexander Jason vothe,seria un ex-agente de WHOOP que ha sido reclutado por una organizacion terrorista y mejorado cibernetica y geneticamente,siendo un obsesionado con la venganza debido a todos los años de combatir el crimen solo para ver el surgimiento de un nuevo villano en su lugar y de las bromas pesadas de Jerry cada vez que lo llamaba a el y sus compañeros agentes a una mision,podrias planetar como ejemplos de misiones muy atroces

-Ser enviado a la tundra mas helada del polo norte de la tierra dos veces,una para recuperar un dispositivo sismico robado y el segundo como una simple prueba,cortesia del sentido del humor de Jerry,por lo que esta harto y sirve como el lider supremo de la organizacion terrorista COBRA
-Ser lanzado constantemente desde las cimas de un avion en movimiento a miles de pies de altura
Y otros ejemplos asi,por el estilo,no es muy dificil dado el sentido del humor de Jerry como jefe.

.Plantear un contacto entre WHOOP y las organizaciones espias de Kingsman y Statesman,las dos organizaciones espias de la saga filmografica y de comics kinsgman,podrias plantea que COBRA esta centrado en eliminar el orden,desde gobernadores hasta reinas,al considerar injusta y desbalanceada el orden social con la influencia de la mayoria de la Humanidad por parte de individuos particulares

Algo que hay que añadir es que el planee eliminarlos y escoger el nuevo orden y gobernadores del mundo,centrandose en remodelar a la Humanidad al considerar que se ha estancado en su evolucion.

-A partir de este Fanfiction combinar Totally spies con la Organizacion de los Hombres de Negro.
Encajarian perfectamente,con tres organizaciones que mantienen el orden mundial y una cuarta que monitoriza la actividad alienigena en la Tierra y por toda la galaxia a lo largo del amplio del cosmos.

Pon protagonistas de la edad de Clover,Sam y Alex dentro de cada una de las organizaciones.

Oh man, this chapter really bringing in the nostalgia.

Step by step Chris is being socialized...

Chris' obliviousness of usual female activities is hilarious and endearing.

Almost like the way it ended for Captain America there but nicely done.

Im adding this to fav and the other one to follow and fav.

I filter out Sam/Scam & incomplete fics, so of all those I've read that don't fall under those, this is definitely one of the best. Epic story, nice OCs, and a lot of fun. Thank you! Marathon should read this one :)

Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!

Super cool love it

Really that's the end of the story I kind of hope she was save by the end.

I really want Chirs to be in the sequel of this story and be part of the canon season 7 and 8.

Loved the ending, but at the same time I hate the fact that Chris had to die :(
And could you post a chapter with Sam, Alex, and Clover...showing their despair or something like that? I would LOVE it!

I want to see a sequel to this story and I want Chris be apart of seaon 7 and 8.

The feels... ),:

That was a great ending, if it ended with her getting saved, I would have just stopped. Loved the end and put a compete on if your finished the story :) I'm so sad but it was great. See ya soon in your other stories.

I'm really enjoying this fic! Every chapter, I feel like I'm watching an episode (with some added language and blood haha). Though, there are a few things I would suggest you improve on: watch your spelling of 'thought,' often times it's misspelled 'though.' There are occasionally inconsistencies with the way the characters respond to things. For example, When Jerry first saw Christine, he recognized her right away, but when she and Sam got WHOOPED together, he didn't. You don't have to change it now (plus stuff like that happens on the show all the time) but for future reference, try and keep the characters as consistent as possible. Another thing, sometimes the action was hard to follow, the same goes for the dialogue. I would suggest putting a little more description into both; with the dialogue, maybe add more feelings that went into the thought and just be more specific when it comes to where people are in the fight and where they end up and how exactly they got there.
Sorry this is a sorry long review, but I really enjoyed reading this sorry! I think you are a pretty good writer, especially when it comes to keeping characters believable and in character. Keep up the good work! I look forward to the epic finale!