| Reviews for A New Dawn |
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Guest chapter 13 . 2/29 Aw no next chapter? |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/9/2019 Nossa já li milhares de vezes, queria muito uma continuação para essa Fanfic |
Demon-night24 chapter 13 . 6/29/2019 Me habría encantado leer más de este fic que lastima q no se actualiza T.T |
Blood Wine and Song chapter 1 . 12/30/2018 How is your English so atrocious if you are an American in college ? That’s freaking hilarious. |
Guest chapter 13 . 12/25/2018 please continue |
Hiniwalay chapter 13 . 7/14/2018 Amazing! Sorry, I haven’t reviewed till now because I couldn’t stop reading. Sasuke was unexpected—excellent. It’s good that his presence will likely remove any remaining doubts Naruto might have on this being reality. It was heartbreaking to know what happened to Wave. It’s interesting to see how the knowledge of infinite tsukuyomi affected Naruto’s reaction to the world. Ahh, poor civilian women. Lol SasukexNaruko. Itachi avoiding looking for a wife HAHAHA. Yay Iruka-sensei! Lol overprotective Minato. When Naruto woke up and reacted to Kushina, for a moment I thought he had amnesia. Hmm, wonder what Kurama would do if he did. Personally I think Minato and Kushina would have had more kids, but I don’t like OCs so I have mixed feelings on Naruko being an only child, haha. I’m hard to please. I thoroughly enjoyed every bit! I really hope you continue. |
nekolovesyou chapter 13 . 7/1/2018 I love it plz update |
Delathen chapter 12 . 5/15/2018 Was shaping up to be a 8/10 before this chapter. Bringing Sasuke in lowered it to a 5/10 - but not for the reason you think. It's because while Naruto can exist is any world, Sasuke can only be defined by two things: revenge for his clan and rivalry with Naruto. Any story he's included in must either be entirely about these two obstacles to the exclusion of everything else until these two points are resolved, or ignored to the point that it's no longer Sasuke. Naruto, however, is defined by a lot a things: optimism, courage, a desire to protect his precious people (and the ability to make new precious friends absurdly easily), and resolve to be a hero. WorldJump!Naruto will almost always have to surmount the initial quest(ion) of "how do I get back?", but that can be resolved or folded up into just about any plotline imaginable, leaving open the rest of the fic to play out any way the author wants. In short, Jumper!Naruto can do anything. Jumper!Sasuke will only go a very limited number of ways. Jumper!Sasuke and Jumper!Naruto in the same story will always go the same way: fight each other until Naruto wins and Sasuke is forced to get over his two insurmountable points in a near mirror of the actual series finale. If you can do something different, if you have a different story planned and thought out, please, post it! We are in desperate need of something new and original to this premise! Hell, the For Want of a Nail that caused Wave in this story is a perfect example of what is great to read! |
NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 13 . 12/2/2017 I've read this story for (I think) the third time and I absolutely love it! It's so full of emotion and I'm so hooked! Every chapter makes me wonder what will happen next and what will happen to Naruto! This is so great! |
Meltricon12 chapter 13 . 10/8/2017 update plzzzz |
AneurysmIncoming chapter 13 . 8/18/2017 I'm pretty sure in chapter 2 you said that Narborough was a Jonin, so I'm not sure whether not elaborating on that is a retcon or just that you forgot so you should probably address that. However, nitpicking aside, I've really been enjoying the story so far and hope you're able to return to it. I do like the fact that while Kushina and Minato are alive there are some negative consequences to this being changed. Keep up the good work! |
Pandora580 chapter 1 . 7/6/2017 I don't get the whole Kyuubi cloak thingy, I mean he can use the Kyuubi mode |
Pandora580 chapter 1 . 7/6/2017 I don't get the whole Kyuubi cloak thingy, I mean he can use the Kyuubi mode |
MegaMindAuthor chapter 13 . 6/21/2017 I'm a but disappointed that you had to bring in Sasuke. I thought this was going to be Naruto focused story. Alas, its not. |
MegaMindAuthor chapter 9 . 6/21/2017 Toes feel stiff and strained right now. This unexpected sickness that has fallen upon Naruto is just another twist that keeps my interests strung. |