write more! now!

this is so . . . awesome!

As I start to read this story all I can say is wow. ForeverDelighted you have done this well. Thank you for this story

This is good. Are u going to continue it?

Please continue you this I'm still here and I know your still writing FanFiction I'm reading your updated ones

make more lots more like they fall in love

Why isn't this being updated? It's so awesome, you can't possibly abandon it! You're still alive, right?

Please continue

Please keep going

pls update pls this story is awesome. cant wait for the next chap

OMG this is amazing, Please continue

Also, maybe you should update this before my inner fangirl goes crazy.
Seriously, this is such an amazingly written fiction, you better not give it up :)

Please, please, please, please have a scene where Jack and Kristoff fight. Pleaseeeeeee.

Maybe Elsa looks exactly like a girl Jack fell in love with while he was alive, and Jack honestly believes Elsa is that girl reincarnated, so he thinks he can easily fall in love with her again. Maybe Pitch was the girl's rich father who didn't want a peasant boy like Jack anywhere near his daughter. Maybe Jack and the girl snuck out together and the girl died while out with jack, so Pitch blamed Jack for it. But that seems like to little of an action to eternally hate someone for. I don't know, maybe Pitch doted on the girl and extremely depressed after her death and was going crazy with grief . Maybe Pitch loved his daughter so much because he was so deeply in love with her mother/his wife who died giving birth to the girl. Maybe Pitch thinks Idun is his wife reincarnated, and he hates Jack more because Jack killed her too.

Maybe I should stop. I' m not that great at theories, sorry XD. Wasn't trying to write the story for you, sorry about that, lol.

this story is entrancingggggggg

Have you ever gotten bored of reading or watching or listening to same the book/movie/song before? And you have to move on to something else?... Well it isn't the same for me with this story or any of your other stories featuring the Snow Queen and The Winter Guardian. No matter how many times I've re-read this I can never get bored. But it's greatly killing me waiting for another chapter!
I imagine that further into the plot of this story Jack and Elsa and the rest of their comrades will team up together to face an even darker enemy. Somewhere I see Jack badly beaten and bruise and wounded, doing everything he can to get a half-dead/dying Elsa to safety, and not even the with the death burning sun barely coming up passing through clouds will stop him. In that moment he forgets his cool and swift ways and Elsa whose barely awake finally gets a glimpse of his true colors in love he has for her. Just a theory.