*coos*

I hope you haven't considered this "complete," because I'd really like to see this story continue!
What a great chapter!
~TRP~

I'm glad to see a second chapter was written. I'm about to read it. I am glad to see this pairing. It is rare. I've always thought Jupiter was most protective of Usagi. (I never liked Rei much, and I'll have to rewatch/find the eps where her softer side comes out because I typically think she's just mean to Usagi). Mako (to me) is more protective and caring to her.
Keep up the great work!
~TRP~

this story is good why have you not update din so long

Will there be an updates? It is a nice story.

Im sad that I missed this last year. It really was adorable, the acceptance and love kept me smiling and having fate rewrite it self was a great little bit.

Thanks for sharing.

I'm sorry I'm really tired, but I saw your fanfiction and thought you deserve a review.
Since I'm already half-asleep I will keep it simple.. It's beautiful, I'm a bit worried that Chibiusa will destroy this adorable cute Couple (whom I never thought of as couple actually, but they're just too cute).
I hope the story will have a happy ending :D

Elfenprinzessin

it's been a while since chapter 1, but all good things take their time, I guess. This story doesn't get nearly the attention it deserves! Looking forward to the next chapter, don't let us wait a whole year again, please!

holy SHIT this was a really good look at the Usa/senshi relationship and also Mako herself and I am a fan of it. I really enjoyed this!

As always I really enjoyed your take on Usagi and her friends.

I must confess, when I first came to 8 years ago, I did so in search of Usagi/Makoto, I don't kn't know why, but at the time that was who I thought my pairing was. Granted that has changed over the years, but I can't lie and say I didn't smile a little bit to see that old flame stoked for this story.

As for the story itself, I enjoyed it. I'm not sure I really agree on Usagi being the normal one, while in some fashion this is true, I think the combo of knowing both of her mothers and her future kinda takes the normal human past and trumps it a bit. Still I enjoyed this because it is a different take then my normal perceptions of the characters.

More then anything I'm curious to see if you do the second chapter like you mentioned. It is an interesting start, and while I like the idea of Mako/Usa, this doesn't quite even start the relationship, let alone say f it works out so I would like to see how you expand on what you started here.

Nice, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!