| Reviews for The Swallow |
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Rho67 chapter 1 . 2/22 Wow, how you made one chapter equal to the epic ending of a novel is incredible. Well done and I too found myself tearing up. |
Jeraly chapter 1 . 11/4/2017 Been nicely written and so thought provoking. Thank you for writing |
AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 3/16/2017 nice :) |
IronEclipse chapter 1 . 1/5/2016 I came upon this story very randomly. I have to say, it was an excellent little discovery! This was an amazing character and concept study! It was very emotional, intelligent, symbolic, and worthy to the characters. I got a little teary to tell you the truth. It just so happened that I was listening to The Lord of the Rings soundtrack while reading this. When the Rohan theme came on I nearly lost it. I suppose that contributed to my emotional state, but it was definitely worth it in the end. Thank you for exploring this concept! It was definitely a good read. ~IronEclipse |
Miss Mia chapter 1 . 8/29/2015 A beautiful, delicately drawn, thought provoking work. Well done. |
Robnrun chapter 1 . 4/20/2015 As beautiful as the swallow, flashing in the sun. Thanks |
Dimac99 chapter 1 . 10/17/2014 Wonderful and very touching. Definitely got a speck in my eye now. *sniff* |
Levade chapter 1 . 10/5/2014 The more things change, the more they stay the same. Outwardly Eomer has changed, but inside, the real person is still Eomer. Same for Pippin and Merry. Lovely way to show that and the ending was really beautiful. I didn't find it sad at all, just lovely. |
Brenne chapter 1 . 5/14/2014 That was amazing. It's sad how things change over time sometimes. Traditions and cultures become lost, history becomes nothing but a myth. Change can be good, it's nice to see new things come about, but I sometimes mourn for the old things that are put away and become forgotten. Sorry, can't help myself, but I don't know what else to say. I love this fanfic! It makes me both happy and sad! Thanks! :D |
sailor68 chapter 1 . 3/31/2014 Well done, thank you! |
The Moonlily chapter 1 . 3/31/2014 I sobbed my way through this one. Love your style, and the bittersweetness of this piece was done very well! |
TortoisetheStoryteller chapter 1 . 3/30/2014 I like your inspiration. Very thought-provoking. |
Garnet Took chapter 1 . 3/30/2014 I absolutely loved this. It is one of the best written, well-thought-out stories I have seen posted on ffnet recently. I thought that you captured the characters in their later years very well and the concept behind the story with the King Edwin and his decision to convert made the story have even more depth of meaning to me. On another note, I love Pippin and Merry above all other characters in Lord of the Rings, and seeing them written so well just made my heart go pity-pat. Thanks for a beautiful story for me to end my weekend on. |
Freyalyn chapter 1 . 3/30/2014 Beautiful. I'm nearly in tears too, but as you said, good tears. And Bede is always a good inspiration. |
fantasychica37 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014 I teared up, too- and beautiful, especially for the Fred and George of the fandom (now that's making me cry, too!) |