adam foot is real headmaster, than albus dumbledor i guess :)

You write very well! It's a Hell of a tale.

Now, I will insult Albus. Not you; Albus.

&*& your God-damned Greater Good,
You frigging hood, am I understood?
To "save" the bad you'll kill the good,
You have a heart of wood.

I think you are a piece of work,
are just a jerk with an evil smirk.
The brits should term you a berk,
as all of us you irk.

Still a good story, not long for an entire year
Impatient for next years

the more star wars movie part almost made me spilt out my water

The "Nutcracker Suite" ballet definitely worked, it one of the ones put on during the Christmas Season! I also liked Harry taking cues from Sirius ! (Something the canon character wasn't allowed to do!)

Keep it up!

And these men were supposed to b so close to the Potters that they were Uncles to Harry, blood or not be damned! Remus' letter should've been among those things Harry received on his 14th birthday, if not at the beginning of Harry's Summer at Dursley plantation. Especially since he knew how down Harry was at Remus leaving Hogwarts on top of hopes that he could live with Sirius smashing down on him.
But it must b true when you're down on yourself, you're blind to when a teenage boy could use a friendly visit from his dead Father's only free friend!

Slip of the tongue, hunh? Still, since Harry & Susan were given occlumency lessons, ol' Tom shouldn't b able to gain as much control over Harry as canon did to canon Ginny before Harry gets suspicious, & hands it over to his Head of House Badger. Right? Right? He will hand in to Professor Sprout sooner right!?

Umm, Disneyland Paris? France? Right next to England? Heard of it?

I think skeargufy is the best misspelling of scourigfy I have ever seen. Bravo. Love the story btw

I do hope Hermione becomes more likeable! Also, I know you’ve finished this story, but it should be edited. You’ve switched “there” and “their” constantly. It reads like you orated it to a machine. Thanks for sharing!

Professor Foote is awesome! Hooray for good Americans! Thanks for sharing!

I’m a little envious that they get to go to Disney World! I went as a child with my choir and I loved it!

Great chapter! I'm glad Amelia arrested Lockhart for his crimes. Doubly glad Lockhart was finally exposed as a fraud in the Daily Prophet!

Another great story in the series. I certainly can't wait to read the next one. I love how you had the diary and scar linked to both be defeated in one shot. I do wish that they'd still been able to get Dobby away from Malfoy though. I really like Dobby lol (and he did try to "help" in his own convoluted way). Going to start the next story now.

Lockhart the Flophart, LOL update soon