Dr. Who

I like James at first I thought he'd abandon Ralts because it was too weak to get through the forest but I'm glad he's a good guy even though he's weird.

Boy you abandon that Ralts and I'll hurt you!

Nice. First author I've seen take that approach with confusion.

I’m hooked!this story is great so far!

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I'd like to say that this story was amazing, the characters where rich with strengths and weaknesses, the battles detailed to wear I could visualize what I was reading, and from what I can remember, two Doctor Who references. I cannot wait for the sequel and revisit most of the characters I've come to love, the three new legendarys included.

Just finished the first chapter and I'm liking it so far. Nice work

Hai! I've just recently completed reading it and I'm going back to reread it again. This was absolutely stunning and mind blowing, an all around fantastic story and sure it had some bits here and there that could've been better, I love it, although to be honest the ending was kinda unsatisfying. I genuinely thought chapter 14 when Mars loses his horn was going to end a-okay, as well as some others but you captured the suspense amazingly and it was such and interesting read.

Wow! This story was amazing! Can't wait for the sequel! :D
Keep up the amazing work! :):)

Really like your story so far :)
Just wondering what happend to the eevee?

I love james he is one of the best oc's i have ever read

Rick! Rick's a nice name.

You really captured mars really well you deserve to be in my favorites .also plz read my story the truth in harmony.

I am moved also neaucleareactor7 you are an amazing author and if you don't believe that believe in me who believes in you