Reviews for Parva Victoriis (Little Victories)
demigodace chapter 5 . 2/7/2019
Eeep! They're half-sisters. That's a nice twist actually. Can't wait to read more.
demigodace chapter 17 . 2/7/2019
And done... It ended a lot fluffier than I expected but in a good way. Sherlolly being tender and sweet is one of my faves. Thanks for sharing! 3
demigodace chapter 1 . 2/6/2019
PS. I'm also very intrigued by the premise of Sherlock being the slave cause in most multi-chapter fics I've encountered it's Molly whose the "slave". Quite excited to read the whole thing.
demigodace chapter 1 . 2/6/2019
Haven't official started reading the story yet.. was just reading the Roman version names of the main cast and just had to comment on how much I loooove how you made Irene Adler Molly's good friend (given that MolRene, platonic or otherwise, is one of my rare-pairs). Aaaanyway, I'll continue reading on now. Peace out xx
Spanish speaker chapter 1 . 5/7/2018
Hello, i just want to write you congratulations for that original idea even if i really don't read your story (i prefer Jonhlock, thank you very much) but i couldn't stop to notice the latín phrases that you use as title of the chapters. They were probably translated by Google and i can tell you that Google translator Is not the best opcion for this language (in my school i have studied latín for five years now and i tried to do my Homework in that way but it never works, never) I tell you this because in the title of the fanfic says "parva victoriis" which means littles victories. It's wrong because parva Is in singular, if you want it to be plural you have to write parvAE . In the case of victoriis, it's wrong because victoria,victoriae Is declinated the same as parva, in first setting. Parvae victoriae or parva victoria if you want it in singular.
On the other hand, the title of the first chapter it's wrong because Ipsum it Is a demostrative pronoun that mean self (myself, yourself, etc)
If you want to write market you have to say forum-i. Or Emporium -ii. I can't recomend you any good website of latín grammar because i use books but if you want to translate just a few words you can use .com or .it.
I hope that help you i can use my knowledge for once in the life for something that Is not of the school.
Xoxo.
White.Demon.Feathers chapter 6 . 6/23/2016
You should make a parallel where Molly becomes a slave to Sherlock's culture! And only SHE is roman but everyone else (john, mary, sally, lestrade, everyone) is British!
Nocturnias chapter 17 . 7/16/2015
Beautiful! A perfect ending. Thank you for being such as fantastic friend and writing this amazing story. I loved every chapter! Brava! *Throws roses and chocolate*
JimMoriarty'sGirl chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
I like this very much. There is something about Roman culture I enjoy. Couple that with Sherlock and I'm in heaven. Can't wait to continue reading this today.
LadyK1138 chapter 17 . 7/6/2015
Beautiful and sexy ending to your historic AU - have loved every chapter!
thedragonaunt chapter 17 . 7/6/2015
A nice gentle ending (mostly). :)
Jellybaby74 chapter 17 . 7/5/2015
I loved every word of this story, from beginning to end. Magnificent!
Poodle warriors chapter 17 . 7/5/2015
A wonderful ending to one of my favorite stories! Well done! Thank you!
Aphraelsan chapter 17 . 7/5/2015
Beautiful. Such a good ending for a GREAT story!
Marie chapter 16 . 5/15/2015
Sweet chapter (in both ways)
thedragonaunt chapter 16 . 5/3/2015
Nice to know that all Molly's staff are loyal and won't snitch to her sisters. :)
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