Hello there!
I came across this fanfic while searching for some OC pilots in the world of IS. And let me tell you,THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I love what you have done with Jordan's personality, and how you've described the battles, characters and really everything to be honest. I've realized that you haven't updated in a while and I have read the chapter about your writer's block (which is a massive pain the ass TTTT) and I wanted to know if you've dropped this fanfic? I've really enjoyed reading this and this has probably become one of my favourite IS fanfics believe it or not! This is an amazing fanfic and I'm definitely going to check out your other works because I simply LOVE your writing! Until next time ~ 3!

I hop you keep up with this story

To answer your question, make it a OC x Tatenashi fic and no one else, this series has too many harems, also great chapter by the way.

So your not making infinite stratos anymore.
That's sad I was hoping that charlotte and Alex are on a date or hangout but later on in a romantic moment M comes out or something okay enjoy your new fanfic

So far this is a good story and very interesting so far. I look forward to the next update now

RWBY reference is not unnoticed "It's also a customizable, high impact sniper rifle." RWBY episode 2. Ruby explaining Crescent Rose to Jaun

Really good story and I really want to see where this goes. Oh and a scythe that is also a high caliber sniper rifle...hmm I wonder where I've seen that *cough* *cough* RWBY *cough*.

Keep it up

I have to admit what I like about the story thus far is how human the OCs are. It just makes the experience better and Jordan his reaction to things are on point. Especially his multiple choice kind of thought process.

Awesome chapter my friend, keep it up :D

Hey guys, I'm thinking of bringing Billy Heath back into it, what do you all think? :)

Ah! The gossip shall fly and much embarrassment in the days to come!

Nice chapter i see you already have a pering in mind dont you and will laura,when she shows up hate him or no have any fellings for him

Best. Computer. Ever.

Sarashiki Tatenashi is like a rose, a rose with a few thorns that can be very difficult to see but are very painful. Pray she doesn't catch wind of Maria's claim.

Sarashiki Tatenashi is described as having 'a voluptuous figure.' She does act like a child, though.

This is going to be... eeexcelent.

The os system you put in is very interesting and the oc himself so Farsi good enough for me, keep it up.