OMP! This has to be the sweetest chapter that I had ever read!

I am happy that Orion and Megatron are friends in this chapter. I do have a character for the next chapter: Goldstorm. She is Orion's half-sister.

You had misspelled the word: feel at the end of the chapter. No misspellings in this chapter.

I can't wait to read the next chapter! I hope to see Goldstorm in the next chapter. Keep up the AWESOME work with your story!

That Optimus and Miko one was almost too adorable for words.

fluffy family background then sudden drop in mood holy shit. loved it!

I found a second mistake: you had put Lockdowns ped-steps instand of Lockdown's ped-steps.

I have plans to get the fourth Transformers movie for Christmas this year from Santa.

I had to reread this chapter a third time to catch the second mistake.

OMP! I LOVED IT! It was perfect in every way! I did see one mistake: you had put Lockdowns stolen ship instand of Lockdown's ship.

I can't believe my luck today! A chapter in my honor with a OptimusxLockdown pairing in it. Thanks for doing this for me. It made my day and weekend!

I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the AWESOME work with your stories!

OMP! Three more days to go! WHOO! I did see the toys for the new movie on TV and at my favorite bookstore.

I did see a few mistakes in this chapter. I did like how Optimus was mad that his paint job was leave easy to be spotted by the cruel humans! He has such a gentle spark. I would LOVE to kick a few human afts to get back at those who hurt him!

I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the AWESOME work with your story!

Mudding in a Semi? and not just any semi, but Optimus Prime?
I'd pay to even see that, let alone ride along.

Optimus and miko in tfp.

OMP! It has been forever since you have last updated any of your stories! When do you plan on updating your other stories? It has been ever longer since you have updated your older stories!

I would like to find out if you plan on doing a challenge with a Optimus/Knock Out pairing in it? They make a cute couple in your other stories.

I can't wait to read the next pairing in the next chapter! Keep up the AWESOME work with your stories! 100% perfect in very way!

Is this sparkling Heatwave from Rescue bots?