Loved it

Aww that ending was perfect! And I loved that Veronica was the one to help bring them together! The shirt bit throughout this fic I just LOVED! I never really thought of the concept of a 'last kiss person' but you made me think of it and I rather like it! I just wish we would've had more of actually seeing them together than just the build up, I feel that so many writers get the buildup perfectly for these 2, and then we don't get a chance to actually see them together, makes me sad. But I loved this story and will take what I can get! This was a great story! I hope you continue to write Madi!

I just started reading this recently and I LOVE it! You write the characters beautifully and very realistically! I HAD to stop on this chapter to leave a comment because I LOVE the Party Down references! When I was reading the description of what Mac was wearing, I'm like that sounds like the Party Down outfits (minus the skirt of course), I wonder if that was a nod to that... then you described the team leader as having a striking resemblance to Vinnie Van Lowe and I couldn't contain my laughter! Great add, especially since Ryan Hansen was also in Party Down! That was another show that did not last long enough for my liking!

Also I love Dick's concern for Veronica even though he masked it as him worrying about Logan, I think he cares for Veronica too in his own special way!

"For you? I have all the time in the world" please excuse me while I go SWOON! And I LOVE that Mac kept Dick's shirt all these years, and now he knows it! 3

Loved this!

This was a really nicely done story. I liked how you gave each character an arc that felt very true. Loved the Party Down reference too!

I would like to be rescued my Captain Malcolm Reynolds too!

I love this fic and just came back to reread it! Please consider starting another!

Really really lovely!

Now I'm going to imagine Capn'Tightpants morphing into Dick Casablancas. Lol.

This story was so sweet, loved it!

Excellent story!

Oh that was a so wonderful ending to a really wonderful story! :D I love it! Really amazing work!
And I especially loved the part as Dick said to Veronica the stuff with the heartbreaking and of course the whole shirt part. :D

Anyway I enjoyed every line of this ff. :)

This was really a good fanfic.. I like it how you went back and forward between the past and present.
Really hope you start a new one..

I really enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing.

AWESOME STORY