Best first time ever story. Realistic. I like the fact they had to try a second time. And voila! Success! So sweet and wonderful!

This was such a sweet story, their innocence made it even sweeter. Loved this!

Very sweet :-)

Loved it wish there would have been a little more about their future if they lasted or what happened later... Great story over all!

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Loveddddd this story. It was perfect.

I always enjoy your writing and this was no diffrent... Sweet cute perfect...

Very nice. I didn't follow that contest, but I'm glad I follow you so I got to read your story.

Love it! This is so sweet.

I love it. Kind of makes me remember a time when I was just beginning to find out about the joys of true love.
I have to wonder what happens next. Will you expand it?
You are a very good writer and I can see how you do well in contests. Please continue to write and I will continue to read.

Gosh, I wish I had had that kind of first time experience with a boy who returned my affections as Edward did Bella's.
They were so sweet with one another, & how nice was it to learn Edward was only a bit more experienced than Bella after all.
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I Loved it!

This was so lovely. A very sweet story, but still genuine and relatable. It made me giggle and swoon and want to read all the HS stories. Well done!