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I almost cried, this was really heartwarming. I really liked reading it.

His name is Houka.

Awwww wonderful fan-fic, kind of sad tho : D but still good!

Pretty nice story. I do have two problems though:
1. The fact that everyone called each other by the same exact names except for Nonon to Mako and Ryuko to Ira. In real life groups of friends like this, especially ones were some of the connections are romantic and some are much closer friends that others, you'll have a better variety. Really, I find it odd for Satsuki or Ira to be using nicknames at all.
2. The utter lack of Sukuyo, Barazou, and Mataro, Mako's actual family.

oooooooooooooooooo, cool, genialm fantastico, muy bueno simplemnte espectacular, ajajajaj, XD, me ha encantado, genial, simplemente genial nwnw

That was just adorable! Not only did it have Mako x Gamagori, but Satsuki x Sanageyama too! I'd though I was the only one that thought of those two would be great together! I also loved all the little things, like Mako and Ira somehow eating with their arms crossed, and Ryuko daydreaming about dancing with her Dad.

Oh, and I liked Satsuki's little suggestion that Ryuko try dating Aikuro. I'd love to see that happen.

Again, great job!