I have just spent 2 days reading all 39 chapters of your story.

I'm staring at that fez on the ground and hoping that you still have more to share. Hoping you still have a story whirling in your thoughts demanding you share it.

You've don't a wonderful job bringing together the different threads of The Doctor's tangled Time (scribble) Line, and despite you stepping outside ofhow things have gone forward in the series, you've given excellent attention to Amy, Rory and River, to Jack and Roseand The Doctor.

I'm so glad someone - namely YOU - notices that leaf and had Rose / Bad Wolf blow it into Clair's father's face.

If you decide to go forward, will we be seeing The 12th Donctor as played by Peter Capaldi?

Clara needs all the help you can give. As either the Clara who died while facing The Snowmen and The Great Intelligence or Oswin, the Clara who with several others survived a starship accident before falling to the Dalek Asylum to be forced into becoming a Dalek herself.

I would have preferred the Doctor traveling with the Governess Clara or Oswin Clara.

Oswin Clara might yet still have dna that the cat / nurses on New New York could use to heal damaged Oswin with.

It would or could even be a possibility since Time spirals over and around herself that Rose spends a few moments with The Face of Boe, recognizing him - since Jack once Hillary's to The Doctor the where he came from he used to be called The Face of Boe.

It could give another meaning that The Doctor won't understand for centuries, when The Face of Boe tells him that he's not alone.

Yes, it's from Martha's time when traveling with tThe Tenth Doctor, but the future, the past, The now, Bad Wolf was getting the tenses mixed up anyways.

Maybe Jack could use a friend anyways after this eons of time.

Hope you still have more to come.

You can find me yahoo. Rehatha

You've done a really wonderful job. Now do some more lol.

Oh man! I just recently returned to this ficbin so happy you updated with more chapters! Hope we get more soon!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE MORE AND UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON

Hellooooooo!
Estou sempre atualizando seu perfil para ver se te alguma atualização da história...você vai continua-la?
Eu sinceramente amo a sua história e gostaria se saber o que irá acontecer nos próximos capítulos!
Por favor, não abandone essa história incrível!
Boas inspirações e vibrações para você!
;*

Great story! This is the second time I've read t! Hope you update soon!

Eight am... I stayed up all night reading and there is no more. Nooooo... I'll go down some rum now then. To hyped over the story to sleep normally...

She isn't talking. River isn't talking. I'm scared. Seriously I'm scared now along with The Doctor.

Nice

I do love the way she dances circles around the poor man.

I know you've updated not so long ago but this is brilliant! Hope you'll keep updating! -A

Hi! I just wanted to say that I enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait for the next one! :)

great chapter loving ur story and that it's different! not the dull rewrite with Rose so many are

OMG LOVE THE DAY IF THE DOCTOR
LOVE THAT EPISODE BEST EVER
Will the 11th doctor ever see Rose again?

How will rose get bac to him n how does she save him

the story has been interesting so far, but the last 2 chapters have basically been copy paste. i'm hoping for some more interesting differences soon