That was great thank you

good story

Pretty damn good.

Ok dude, seriously, one of the best ones involving these two I have read in a long time. I had literally spent the entire night reading it. One thing though that would have been really hot, is to see Alice as a Futa. Just saying. Loved the story can't wait to read more. :)

This seems to be one of your better works for me. The AUishness made Bella's personality alright. The pacing was good. The plot and conflict were both great. I really enjoyed this more than most of your other stories.

You know, this is actually really good. You're writing itself is fantastic.

I don't know what to say except "WOW" what a great fic. I have started reading your works and even though some are very dark they are often consuming and fulfilling. You have a great gift so please keep telling stories. If it has Bella and Alice, all the better.

Hot but with good story line. Im glad despite too many sex scenes, there is still love and sweetness between Bellice.

For some reason, I pictured Victoria as Pokemon and Alice as the trainer.

Lovely story i mustve fucked myself nearly five times throughout reading this, lol. I think im gonna do it again now, making it six. Thx for making me cum. Xoxo #bi-sexual teen

Great story!

I fucking love this! Absolutely amazing!

God damnit. I went to read this over again because it was just that good, and even the second time around, KNOWING what was going to happen, I got so distressed during the whole thing. I have never simultaneously loved and hated a character as much as I did Alice in this story and I swear I just lost five years off my life for reading this, but oh my god it was so good and I loved every minute of it

I loved it. I fucking love this so much! It's an amazing story and I'm not just saying that because of all the hot smut. I loved all of their personalities and jabs and darkness. Truly an amazing ride :) thank you

Thanks, Like it :-)