This is the seventh time I re read the story. Yes I'm crazy but the story is so well written that I couldn't help myself.

SO CUTE OMG

A sex scene! Oh yeah! Nice story!

This is by far the best fanfict on Elsa's first intimate night. Her character so real, the moments so tender, sensual and touching.

Oh, my...Elsa is so adorable young lady. The first night...it is so fun that the queen asked for the opinions of what is the feeling of sex from her little sister. But I like that you wrote a lovely ending for them, I bet that both Josef will not let Elsa go in his whole life.

"The door was suddenly thrown open and Josef was unceremoniously thrust inside by Kristoff and the other men. There was a loud huzzah as the door slammed shut and the lock clicked" Hehehe I'll review the rest of the chapter some other time (BASICALLY I LOVED THIS FIC, VERY SWEET AND SINCERE, YOU'RE AWESOME), but I just also wanted to say how much I loved that bit, I found it so funny! (especially the "HUZZAH!" *click* part),awwwww I would have loved to see what was goin on with Josef, Kristoff, and the boys right before this chapter :D

Dang. I should not be surprised how much care you put into this chapter, not thinking back over the excellent quality of the series thus far, but dang.

Having her think of passion and heat. That was a clever solution. As I think I may have said before reviewing the series, Elsa is in an odd position as a Monarch because if she does not trust her marriage partner 100% it cannot end well. It's love or nothing. A healthy love at that. I did wonder if the ice on Josef's jacket and Elsa's concerns over how her powers might react had been dropped, it never seemed to come up again in the primary story arc.

I guess Kristoff being into shamanism makes sense.

Well, I'm half dead of flu. With stuffed nasal passages and cold shivers held at bay with a hot water bottle. I figured there would never be a better time to read something hot!

So touching! Great companion to the original story. Love it a lot.

... that ...

... was ...

... lovely ...

One of the more realistic depictions of MAKING LOVE I've happened across on this site. Realistic and beautiful, as love-making should be. You are to be congratulated.

I wanna cry! I tried to delay this moment as much as I could and now I finally read it and it was as amazing as I expected. Thank you so much for this story it was really beautiful. I'm following you just in case you might do a sequel or publish another Frozen story, I really am hoping to see more of you because I honestly think you are a great writer.
Good luck!

Okay then...

Don't mind me, I'm just here to tell I read it and make you feel uncomfortable.

I loved it. Feeling awkward right now? HA. Well, I kinda am, you know, since when guys talk about this stuff with girls they tend to think they're sick and perverted bastards. It's not like you wrote it... oh wait it is.

but in a more serious note, I think you did a great job and you kept Elsa in character. as In-character as she could be in this scenario, anyway. *wink wink* (awkward enough already? okay, fine)

And like I told you, you don't need to feed trolls, they're out there because that's what they do, annoy people. Have more internet accounts than goals in life... You get the idea, there're always gonna be attention whores around here. Better for you to just ignore them.

I'll have to admit that I looked for the chaps in the original story yesterday, that's why I couldn't see it till tonight. It was worth it (back to weirdness now). I really like your writing so it's needless to say I really enjoyed it.

I'm sure Elsa and Josef had the real "fun". Love your stories! Nice touch with the adding of FIN.

Simply Amazing my friend. Well done indeed