I'm impressed, Spirit actually approves. Lol.
Such a heartwarming story, seeing how Spirit's view of Soul had changed and all.
I like that you wrote it in Spirit's perspective of Soul and Maka's relationship, it's unique. Great job!
-That Person

Cute and wonderful!?

Aww I don't dislike Spirit. I kno he is stupid but I think he still is a good dad who cares a lot for Maka and even tho she doesn't show it she loves him too. A lot of stories make him tge bad guy and I don't believe he is. Just not one for commitment. Love this tho :-D

This was wonderful! I love Spirit's perspective on Soul and Maka, and you wrote it extremely well. It was funny, bittersweet, and thoughtful.
I would like to point out, though, that you kept flip-flopping between past and present tense. You might wanna keep an eye on that in future.

hahahahahahaha, wait what? spirit you weirdo, you are so weird, weird weird weird weird weird weird weird weird little scythe. yup.