Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh! This chapter sent me through a whirlwind of emotions! Normally it's really hard for me to read au's cause they make me sad but that build up to Pinkie's smile was so worth it! You are an incredibly talented writer!

I always enjoy a good 'what-if' fic, and this is no exception! Loved it, would love to see a continuation of it.

Great story! There were a few details about the story that didn't match up with the show, but I loved it nonetheless.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh its Romano as a ponyyyyyyyyy

clever little colt

I am so mad at cortland right now... Words can't even describe! He's just sooooo annoying. UGH!

ponies de manzanas?

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Ok, three things: one, Cortland, you have absolutely no idea how much I hate you right now -.- Two, you're right, Bluejinx, there IS something fishy going on, and I hope you get to the bottom of it before Cheese (and Pinkie) are too far away to get in contact with. Qnd three, NO PINKIE PIE, NOOO! DON'T LEAVE YOUR FAMILY NO MATTER HOW ANGRY THEY MAKE YOU! And four, I hope Pinkie finds Cheese before it's too late, cause he's on the CheesePie express, and I SHIP IT LIKE FEDEX! And k, I'm done now :) (and yes, I know I said three things, but who cares?)

I don't know why I thought Cheese could reason with him. All that drama had to leadnup to SOMETHING that had a lasting effect... BUT DAT CHEESEPIE MOMENT DOE! I literally SQUEE'd. Like, it got hard to breathe, I literally got choked up. ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER FOR (hopefully) MORE DRAMA!

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE (That was me squealing like the fangirl I am) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
*Has massive seizure and heart attack and dies from over exposure to cuteness*
BUT THEN - my ghost sees the end of the chapter and repossesses my body and I become a zombie of OOOOH SNAP SHIZZ IS ABOUT TO GO DOWN! And then I realize I'm rambling and Imma stop now XD

I like the way things are going in this fic. Granted, I hate how sneaky and underhanded (umm, underhoofed? Idunno, lol) Cortland's scheme is, but it makes the story a ton more interesting! And the way I imagine it (as a rough prediction) the rest of the story will play out like: One of the Pies finds the fake letter sent to Cheese, he'll get in trouble, they'll somehow realize that Cortland is to blame, they'll face off, Cortland will be punished, Tommy will meet the Pies, and Cheese and Pinkie will get together. And of course, somewhere in between, Cheese will have to face Igneous and play the role of the humble suitor begging for the father's approval.

But this is (quote Pinkie) "Just a hunch!" XD anyway, can't wait to read the rest!

If I hadn't already faved this, I would have done so a thousand times. XD

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! CORTLAND, HOW COULD YOU DO THAT?! DX All the same, I absolutely LOVE drama like this. Just as much as fluff :)

First off, happy belated birthday! (I say belated because I'm reading this after it's been completed). Second, ... That's it.

Just kidding! I really enjoyed the chapter! I literally SQUEE'd when Pinkie kissed Cheese... Like, I SHIP IT LIKE FEDEX! XD CHEESE PIE FOREVER!

Ah, Smile was my second guess, to be honest.