Man screw "Horror", this site needs a "Fucked" genre.

Was a fun ride, though.

A very well written story. I feel like chapter 27 ended with a cliffhanger ending. And I want to know what happens after. Will Raven and Jinx reunite? What waits for them on the other side? Will you write similar stories like this?

I really enjoyed reading this.

That last chapter hits you right in the feels...

I love it! I loved everything about this fanfic! You are truly amazing and know how to make a person fall in love! (ღωღ) Almost cried when Jinx died... And everythjng Raven felt after she died... That hit me hard 'cause i feels her man... BUT GREAT STORY MATE!

(ps sorry if im late on finding this. Just recently got into fanfics! Sorry)

...wow.

Oh my god this story broke me.

You know what would be fun? An Etrigan vs Raven Death Battle! That would be fun.

Well...they say that life imitates art. Perhaps this holds doubly true for the people who create the art itself? Wel, whatever was making you angry all the time, wherever you are, I hope that you were able to work through it and get back to being the relaxed individual than that the author's note at the beginning of this story made you out to be.

Ooh! So, is the *supposedly* Dark Raven in this story like The Punisher, then? I mean, she spends an awful lot of time talking about how the people who commit crimes need to die, but she also eats children. So...What's up with her? I get the Punisher *feel* from the speeches that she's made so far, but her eating children thing tells a different story.

Binge read all of this. Holy hell this was an emotional rollercoaster, loved every second. Except the end. You can't do that without a Shakespearean tragedy warning, it's just not cool T_T Going to check out Avalon soon!

What is wrong with people like you? Please, consult a therapist.

What a rollercoaster of a story. There is too much to put into words other than that feeling of wanting to to cheer on the "bad" guys to defeating justice and that no matter how strong they are, the forces of darkness are that much more powerful. Sure the good is the light of the universe providing life and inspiration, but given time, even the stars will fade.

Best of luck, stay healthy, and write on.

-Sky66

I really don't know how to feel about this story. It was... interesting? Definitely entertaining, in a twisted way. Well-written beyond the vast majority of fanfiction I've read. Very complicated. Good, but terrible. A great display of your skill as a writer, but a good display of how twisted people can be. One I appreciate, but not one I am likely to revisit later.

I suppose the only questions I have now are whether the Titans will survive the story, and if so, will they be physically and mentally intact?

Well, it seems Raven has not chosen to fight her demon side in this one. Clearly not a good thing.